Author's Note: Really, guys, be brutal with me, here. I need it. I haven't written much of anything outside of classes for ages, and I need all of the criticism I can get–and I mean EVERYTHING! Please help me out, and be harsh if necessary. I love you guys! :)
Disclaimer: Psh. Yeah right, like I'd own that... (Wish I did, though!)
Don't Leave Me All Alone
Prologue
Her tangled, chestnut-colored hair whipped around her face, chin held bravely up, tears dripping down her pale cheeks. The wind tossed and turned, mocking her agony, pushing and shoving her. Her robes billowed about her, while the clouds above threatened. From where she stood, everything within miles was visible. The lake, disturbed by the wind; happy students running about, glad that exams were over, all speckled points on the green, green grass of Hogwarts' grounds. The ground was at least a mile from the top of the tower--to fall would be her death.
Which was exactly what she wanted.
Her breath caught in her throat as a sob escaped her lips. She held her arms out to her sides, took a deep breath, and dove off the tower.
Author's Note: Yeah, it's short, but I wanted it that way. It's more meaningful this way, I think. What do YOU think? Hmm? You can tell me by pushing that ickle button down there, you know... winkwink
Disclaimer: Psh. Yeah right, like I'd own that... (Wish I did, though!)
Don't Leave Me All Alone
Prologue
Her tangled, chestnut-colored hair whipped around her face, chin held bravely up, tears dripping down her pale cheeks. The wind tossed and turned, mocking her agony, pushing and shoving her. Her robes billowed about her, while the clouds above threatened. From where she stood, everything within miles was visible. The lake, disturbed by the wind; happy students running about, glad that exams were over, all speckled points on the green, green grass of Hogwarts' grounds. The ground was at least a mile from the top of the tower--to fall would be her death.
Which was exactly what she wanted.
Her breath caught in her throat as a sob escaped her lips. She held her arms out to her sides, took a deep breath, and dove off the tower.
Author's Note: Yeah, it's short, but I wanted it that way. It's more meaningful this way, I think. What do YOU think? Hmm? You can tell me by pushing that ickle button down there, you know... winkwink