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(Albus' point of view)
After Hogwarts was rebuilt, the new group of wizards of witches came. Dad was now the quitich coach and also a helper. Dad was going on and on on how Hogwarts looked the exact same. My first day, I was nervous . I didn't want to be put in to Slytherin,Huffulpuff, or Ravenclaw. I wanted to be like dad and go to Griffindor. When we arrived, dad was there to greet me and my sister, Rose. Rose was tall like mom and smart, like aunt Hermonie. Rose was older then me so dad taught her a little. I didn't want to get in trouble so I stayed out of it.
We walked in to in to the hall so we could see what house we would be put into. I was in... Gryffindor! Sadly, my sister was in Rafenclaw. Toby, the guy I sat on the train with, was also in Gryffindor and in my dorm. " Albus!" Dad was calling me. He told me this, " after the first flying lesson, I'll see how you do. If you do good, your on the team." I was so excited I hugged dad and told him, " I won't let you down".
The next day was Wizard chess and flying lessons. The Wizard chess was strategy, there are no killing pieces. I walked in the room and, BAM!
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