Second to last scene with Saphire and Kiba before shippuden

Use "my last breath" by evanescence

Saphire "dies" fighting a Hyuuga (IT'S HIASHI) because of messed up chakra pathways

(Saphire running through a forest suddenly stops in a clearing, holding her hand to her chest, she realizes she's not wearing her crystal. Mentally gasps/yells "KIBA!! It…hurts…") Kiba gets there just in time to catch her as she falls, yells "Saphire!" just as he catches her. The Hyuuga attacks messed up her chakra too much, and she can't keep her main chakra balanced without her crystal.

Before she dies, Saphire drops genjutsu and shows Kiba her true form (fur, tails, ears, eyes, etc.)

Also tells him "No matter what, keep my fangs, my swords with you, you and my fangs are my strongest tie to this world. This isn't the end. Wait nine months, one month for each of my tails to reform. On the night of the full moon in the tenth month, one of Inari's messengers will be here waiting for you."

Kiba: But how..?

Saphire: You'll recognize it as soon as you see it. And this will lead you.

(leans up to kiss Kiba, when he pulls away, saphire blows small ball of fox fire into him with her last breath)

"My soul will guide you…"

Small explosion of blue fire lights up the whole clearing, saphire is gone. Kiba faints from chakra exhaustion and blood loss.

(Next Morning) Kiba wakes up in the hospital, and immediately jumps up from the bed, scaring Naruto and Tsunade.

"Where's Saphire!?" He yells.

Tsunade frowns and looks at him. "We were just going to ask you that Kiba. We found you with Saphire's swords in the forest last night. Lucky for you, a few of the others saw the flash bomb you set off."

Kiba stares at her with his mouth open. "Then…it wasn't just a nightmare. She really is...no, she can't be. Not her. I've gotta find her!" he tries to run out the door but Tsunade grabs him.

"You're not going anywhere. What happened last night?" She demands, while hauling Kiba back into his bed, and quickly tying him down. Kiba tells her what happened, still hoping it was just a nightmare. Tsunade is about to say something when Kakashi comes in holding something.

"Found a badly injured Hiashi in his house this morning, telling one of his servants to destroy this." He holds out his hand, showing Saphire's now broken necklace with the crystal and two fangs. "He said, and I quote, 'Destroy the demon's necklace so it can't come back."

Kiba starts struggling and yells "That bastard, I'll kill him! He killed Saphire! HE KILLED HER!!"

Naruto stares at the necklace, his eyes turning redder as he does. Then he says in the double voice of the Kyuubi and himself "That bastard killed my sister. HE...!!"

Naruto gets cut off as Neji, Hinata, and Hanabi come running into the room. Neji and Hanabi both yell "Where's Saphire?!" while Hinata mumbles "Tou-san was saying things, wanted to make sure he wasn't serious…"

All three see from the looks on everyone's faces, especially Kiba, that Hiashi was serious.

All turn around when Anko, leaning in the door, says "He attacked her when her back was turned. After she finished putting a barrier around the complex, he attacked her.

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That's all I've got so far, and i will be adding to it. I don't yet know which story it will be used for, either way it will be awhile before it's used. I might not even use it in any of my current stories. But no matter when i'm going to use this, i need opinions. I know it's confusing, but thats because this is an extremely rough draft, meant more for my reference than anything. Actually, none of it would make sense right now...but whatever. Please please please leave lots of detailed reviews, i need help refining this scen as it will be a high point in a story sooner or later. Oh and im one of the people that thinks Hiashi is a jerk. Because..all the evidence says he is. And this is actually my first attempt at writing a death scene. i can easily imagine it, but i don't know how well i put it into words...anyways REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW I'M BEGGING YOU!!! I NEED HELP ON THIS SCENE!!!