*4/25/15* If you actually read this, I honestly applaud you. Be grateful that you never really got to know the gary-stu by the name of "Galaxy".
Honestly, I kinda want to re-write this, though I never really improved much with my writing. It's something to think about for me.
If I do re-write it, I'm not sure if I'll do it here (this account is already cringey enough), I'll most likely will either do it on deviantART or my old Wattpad. Anyways, don't expect this version to be updated anymore lol. And sorry if you just came across this, just keep an eye out I guess.
Later
-Red
*NOTE this is the first fan fiction I have ever made for anything, so this is probably going to fail a lot XD I just want you to tell me what
I could work on, and please don't be mean .3. Enjoy~ X3*
Prologue
The dark gray sky rumbled. There was a big storm coming, and everybody was inside.
By the forest, there was a twolegplace. In one of the twoleg nests there were cats, or kittypets. A gray she-cat was lying on a cat bed, with three little kits lying by her side. There was one tom and two she-cats. The tom was black all over, one of the she-cats was brown, and the other one was gray like her mother.
A brown tom walked into the room with a big smile on his face. He couldn't wait to see his new kittens and name them. The gray she-cat slowly opened her eyes and picked up her head with a little smile on her face.
"Hello, Fudge." meowed the gray cat happily, "Are you here to see the kittens?"
"Of course!" Fudge exclaimed excitedly, walking over to the she-cat. He looked at the kittens proudly, knowing that he is going to be the best father.
"You know..." mewed the she-cat, "I haven't given them names yet, so I was wondering if you would like to with me?"
Fudge smiled, then nodded. He looked at both of the she-kits.
"Cinder... Can I name the girls?" Fudge asked quietly.
"Yes." Cinder meowed calmly and quietly.
"Okay."
Fudge thought for a moment, then he thought of the perfect names.
"How about... The brown one could be Cocoa... and the gray one could be... Moon?"
"Those are both great names." Cinder purred, "I decided to name the boy... Galaxy."
"Galaxy? How come?"
"I don't know..." Cinder replied, "I guess I always wanted a kit named Galaxy, and I guess I thought it fit him..."
Fudge looked at the black kit, then smiled.
"I think it fits him too." He mewed.
Cinder and Fudge looked at Galaxy, then they both looked at each other. Cinder smiled.
"Do you think he is going to be a great cat one day?" She meowed.
"Think?" Replied Fudge, "I know."