The big Mistake
Loren is turning 17 years in four days and Trent and Nora are planning a big surprise for her. Loren wake up from her amazing dream by her alarm clock. She went to her closet and took out her outfit then went to the shower. Loren came out of her room looking amazing. She is wearing a black tank top, white skinny jeans, black knee high boots with gray jacket. Her make-up was light and natural with her long natural curl hair that reaches just above her waistline.
Nora: Good morning sweetie
Loren: Good morning mom. She went to the living where her dad was reading the newspaper and gave him a kiss on the cheek and sat on his lap putting her hand around his neck.
Trent: Good morning angel, how was your night?
Loren: It was amazing; I had a good sleep and beautiful dream. Then she became quiet like something was wrong with her.
Trent: Angel, is something wrong? Do you want to talk about it?
Loren: Nah, it will sound stupid
Trent: Angel, you know I want you to be happy so whenever you are ready to talk about, I will be here ok. And remember you will never be stupid to anyone
Loren: Smiling, I will daddy.
Trent: that's my princess
Nora: Breakfast is ready
They ate breakfast and talk about random stuffs and after breakfast, Loren helped her mom clean up while Trent went to his home office to his briefcase.
Nora: Honey, I will not be able to take you to school because I have to be at the office in 20 minutes so your dad will take you.
Trent: Are you ready angel
Loren: Ready dad. Loren puts her books in her backpack gave her mom a kiss on the cheek and Trent kiss Nora on the lip.
Trent: Bye honey, I love you
Nora: I love you too, drive safely and be safe. I love you sweetie
Loren: I love you too mom.
Bad boy Eddie who have dated almost every girl in his class was still sleeping
Katy: Eddie honey time to wake up you will be late for school
Eddie: Can I please sleep for another 10 minutes?
Katy: Ok 10 minutes only
Max: Is Eddie up? He will be late for school
Katy: I will wake him wake in 10 minutes
Max: He is being spoiled, how can you wake him up every weekday? Who will wake him up when he goes to collage? With that said he went to Eddie's room to wake him up. Son you need to get ready for school breakfast will be serve in 5 minutes.
Eddie: Can I skip breakfast?
Max: No, breakfast is the most important meal of the day and you are not going to skip any in this house.
Katy: Max it is ok just leave him alone
Eddie: Thanks mom
Max: we will regret this one-day
Katy: he will chan…
Max: When will he change? He is 18 for Christ sake and in 5 months, he will be in collage.
Katy: You know what, I am not in the mood to ague with you this morning about how I should bring my son up.
Max: Oh so now he is just your son, ok
Eddie: Breakfast is getting cold
Eddie gets to school and sees his friends siting at their usual place on the front entrance stairs waiting for him as always. He parked his car and went towards them. Just then Loren's dad pulls up and parked just in front of the school building for Loren to get out.
Eddie: hi guys
Everyone: Hey
Trent: Kissing his daughter on the cheek, Take care princess your mom will pick you up after school, I have a meeting but I will be home for dinner
Loren: ok daddy, I love you
Mel: Hi Loren, hi Trent
Trent: hi Melisa, how are you
Mel: Fine thank you
Trent: Bye girls, take care
Ian: Hi Loren, hi Mel
Girls: Hi
Eddie: Hi girls
Mel: Hey Eddie, Loren just continue walking without saying hi to Eddie
Eddie: Loren what is wrong with you I said hi
Loren: Do I have to respond to you? Did I beg you to say hi to me? I don't need you to greet me.
Eddie: What do you think you are, the princess or
Loren: You know what, I will not waste my precious time on stupid things, have a good day Mr. I am better than anyone
Eddie: What is her problem? I just said hi
Tyler: Man, just let it go.
Eddie: Why? Isn't she like all the other girls in this school?
Adam: That is why you are wrong.
Eddie: What do you mean?
Ian: She is not like all of the other girls, she is Loren Tate, the hot girl in this school who you have not date yet and who did not fawn all over you like the other girls.
Eddie: Smiling, I will date her get into her pant and damp her then you will see she is same as all the other girls. I have money and my parents are rich and famous.
Adam: I will love to see that day.
Eddie: Who will not fall in love with a hot, handsome and rich guy like me?
Tyler, Ian and Adam: Loren Tate.
Tyler: Man, she has turn down every single guy who wants to date her, even Carmon.
Eddie: Did any of you try to date her?
Ian: Mate, you talk like today is your first day in this school, she turned all of us down. With that they went to their locker to pick the books they need for their first class.
The bell ring and they depart for their various classes. Eddie has America history and when he got there, he saw Loren talking to Kim and Mel. He went and sat behind Loren thinking of a plan that he can get Loren to go on a date with him. Mr. Lamb, the History teacher came and told the class that they are going to be pair in twos for their last project work, which will cost forty percent of their grade.
Mr. Lamb: Ok I have assign you all with a partner, Kim you are with Dylan, Toni and Leslie, Brandon and Melisa, Shawn and Alicia, Eddie and Loren, and Phil and Adriana.
Loren: Mr. Lamb, can you please change my partner?
Mr. Lamb: Any tangible reason?
Eddie: I don't want to change my partner I am fine with my partner.
Mr. Lamb: Anybody wants to change partner with Mss. Tate? Nobody answered. Miss. Tate I am sorry I can't do anything about it and also remember it is 40% of your grade. Melisa mouth sorry to Loren. Loren turned to look at Eddie who smirked at her which made her angry more.
Eddie: Are you ready to work, partner?
Loren:
Eddie: just let me know when you are ready
Loren: You know what? We are suppose research for Mexican-American War, the Gold Rush and the West expansion. Which one do you want us to do first, you can ready and I will ready take notes and then we can share idea and I you can come up with a good idea for this. Forcing a fake smile.
Will Eddie get Loren to go on a date with him? Please review