Sup, Peeps. This is my "Story" I'm into Maximum Ride. So, I'm a little rusty. I might not be so good. But Just Review; Okay ? Thaankss Loovees. (:
Before I start writing; this story is gonna be about Max and Fang. [Obv.] and How there friendship turns into love. [It sounds SO corny. But just read it.]
MAX'S POV:
Hey, I'm Maximum Ride. [A.k.a Max.] for some of you who don't know me. I'm the Kick-Butt 17 year old that lives with her Mother [Velencia Martinez], Nicholas Martinez [Fang], Nudge, Angel, Iggy & Gazzy.
So, yeah. Anyways. My mirror hates me. I think somehow god thought "Hey, I'm just gonna make this here chick UGLY AS CRAP." Gee, thanks God.
Anyways, as of right now; as I'm looking in my mirror [the one that hates me oh, so much.] I can hear Fang in his room, with the one and only. Yes; you guessed it, Lissa Mckenna. She's the "Prettiest" girl at Sheawood High School. & Yes. She's dating my best friend [Fang.]
So, with my beastly-ness; I pound on the wall & say "AYE, YO. THE LOVELY MARRIED COUPLE. SHUT THE FRIG UP!" Then, an epic silence breaks through. Yeah Buddy, I got 'em.
So, the silence lasted for 5 minutes, and then I hear a door open, close, open and the last open was to my room. It was Fang. Oh, Joy. I'm just sitting there, staring into space, because you all know how fun that is, and I see Fang. Wow. 3 years ago, when Fang and myself were only 14 years old, he was NOTHING like he is now [appearance wise.] At 14, he had Dark hair, down to the middle of his forehead, Onyx eyes, Tiny Biceps, and a start of a 4 pack. Now, his hair was down to his eyebrows, with a slight flip to it, amazing biceps, and an 8 pack. His chest was also amazing. I mean, not that I've been looking or anything. -.-
Back to reality, so Fang is standing there. And I'm like "What, Fang?, Ever heard of the word 'Knock'?" Oh how I love my sarcasm. "No, maybe you'd like to tell me sometime. Max, what the frig is your problem?", "Shut up. Fang, I don't have a problem; why do you ask?" I say sarcastically.
"Oh, gee Max. I dunno. While me and Lissa are in my room we hear a random 'bang' on the wall? I wonder who did that?" I love when he try's to pull off a sarcastic act, he know's I'm the master. Haha, petty petty boy. "Well, I wouldn't have had to bang on the wall if you and Princess Lissa were just a wee bit quieter!" oh the irony. "Whatever, just please don't do it again?". "Hmmkay. Whatever." "Max, I'm serious." "So am I, Fang. Now, please leave my room. Good-bye." "Bye, Max." I could see a small grin escaping his beautifully, engineered mouth. Boy, I thought I'd never see the day I'd be swooning over my best friend.
Okay; sorry it's a little short. It's the first chapter. I'll try and update tomorrow. If I get 5 reviews I'll do 2 chapter. So REVIEW.
Thank's guys, I appreciate it. (: