Yes, Alina here. Ok I need to know if I should make this into a chapter story. As you hopefully read on the summery I already have the second chapter typed up and I should like to know if this is good enough to continue.

Disclaimer: No, no, NO! (Need I say more?)

My breath came heavily. I lay on the ground, blood dripping out of my mouth. Out of the haziness of pain one thought held out.

'No…'

No! I would not be like them! Never! They couldn't make me! I heard a heart wrenching sob but I soon realized it was me. A voice rang in my ears.

"It is your destiny Sirius."

I painfully opened my eyes to see the owner of that voice. A beautiful face twisted into unimaginable hate was hovering over me. Hair so much like my own fell around her. She was the inflictor of my pain.

My mother.

"You can't…" I began but she cut me off with a hard slap to the face.

"You will not tell me what I can and cannot do!" she hissed "You will become a Black! You must live up to the honor of your name!"

I try to move away from her but pain shoots through my arm. I fear it may be broken. I try to stop this pain in the only way I know how. Giving in.

"Yes mother, I will become a Black." I say in a whisper barely audible. I hate myself for those words and how empty their promise sounds. They feel like a blazing fire that has burned out. Something once great, now defeated.

I feel a strong punch to my stomach. It pushes what little breath I have out of me.

"Make me proud you sniveling boy. You're lucky that I didn't disown you, worthless lump."

The woman I once recognized as my mother gets up, making sure to step on my hands with her high heels. A sickening crack fallows.

"Don't fail me," are her last words before leaving.

I am left in my room on the floor, crying freely, cradling my fingers. I feel numb. I start to breathe in great gulps of air, as if I will never breathe again. A thought strikes me. A hysterical laugh comes pouring out of my lips. I make no effort to stop it.

"One day" I say to my room "I won't be pushed around. One day no one will tell me what to do, because one day I will get my revenge. They will be sorry, all of them. One day I'm going to be too powerful to ignore."

R/R please! Hope you liked it cringes