Hey!
So, this story should be good. I'm taking my time in writing it and I'd love to have some feedback/ criticism. Please though don't flame because I am trying my hardest to get better at writing.
Violet is the total opposite of what she is in AHS season 1; she's popular, sociable and funny. Tate, however, is exactly the same cutie we all know and love. It's set in 2011 (A/U) and they're both alive! I don't know how this story will turn out, but I hope it turns out good! (:
Enjoy and please feel free to review it only takes like a minute ;)
Saturday 15th May 2011 10:00 am
Violet Harmon
The Harmon's car rolled up in front of their brand new house. Violet smiled radiantly, turning off her iPod and hoping out of the car happily. She looked up at their new house – it was fantastic! A new start for all of them; and hopefully no one would fuck it up this time. She watched as her mom and dad stepped out and closed their doors
"How'd you like it then Vi'?" Ben, her father, asked with a huge smile on his face. Violet looked down from the house, squinting slightly because of the bright sun "it's great dad. I never thought I'd say this but, you sir have great taste!"
Vivien, her redheaded mother, laughed slightly as she cradled her small dog to her chest "I agree Violet."
Ben smirked at his wife "Hey!" He teased.
Violet was glad to see them getting on well together; especially after everything that had happened between them. Hopefully now they could just start a fresh and forget all the bad memories that once surrounded them.
Violet pulled out her iPhone and brought up her Tumblr which she'd named, quite hastily, ViViButterfly. She smiled as she began typing
'Omg just moved into my new house it looks great. OMggggomgoKMGAKDOFAF wish me luck guys! '
"Violet, would you like to see your room?" Her mom asked, coming up behind her, startling her a bit. Violet quickly shoved her phone back into her pocket and nodded
"Yeah sure mom."
Tate Langdon
"Tate mom said you have to wake up now!" Tate's little sister, Addie, yelled from outside of his door. He groaned and turned over in his bed, his pillow over his head so that it was the darkest it could be in his room.
"Go away…" he mumbled, slavering slightly onto his other pillow.
"Tate Langdon you get your lazy ass up and open this door right now!" He heard his mother snap as she banged her fist against his bedroom door. He sighed and slid out of his comfortable bed.
As his bare feet hit the floor he felt something sharp stick into them. He yelped a bit, looking down to find empty cans of energy drink scattered across the floor, the trail ending near to his Xbox. He ruffled his hair and ignored the mess as he opened the door for his mom.
"Your breakfasts do- Oh my lord. Look at the state of your bedroom! Tate, clean that up! That is unhygienic; we could get rats!"
"Give me a break mom; I've just got up." He yawned and slammed his door in her face, locking it again. He heard her mumble something under her breath before she clanked away in her high heels.
He smiled to himself and made his way over to his window where he opened his curtains, letting in the glorious sunlight. He blinked a couple of times to adjust his eyes to the new lighting.
After he could see properly he began glancing up and down his street.
'Nothing new. Same old shit as yesterday- waittttttt a second! A new family.'
He could see the back of two girl's heads; one blonde one fiery red and a man on the other side of their black car.
He didn't think much of them and shut the curtains again, making his way over to his Xbox. This was his kind of weekend!
As he pushed the button to turn on his xbox console and entered the disk that read 'Left 4 Dead: 2' he got ready for some serious zombie killing business.
Violet Harmon
"I love it mom. It's beautiful – did you pick the wallpaper?" Violet asked as she studied her new room corner to corner. It was her kind of room…her parents knew her too well!
The wallpaper was decorate with flowers, but yet it didn't look childish. The double bed was in the middle of her room and her compute desk that her laptop sat on was right next to it and on the other side some drawers that contained her clothes and a full body mirror.
"No your father did." Vivien smiled, setting her dog down on the laminated floor "you couldn't look after Hallie while I go sort something's out downstairs could you?"
Violet nodded "Oh, sure I can mom."
Vivien thanked her with a smile before leaving. Violet grinned to herself and took off her coat quickly, throwing it onto her bed. She pushed back some loose strands of hair that had fallen out of her ponytail back out of her face.
"Home sweet home." She mumbled, sitting down at her desk and turning on her laptop.
Tate Langdon
He was twenty minutes into a game of Left 4 Dead 2, and was in a deep conversation with one of his buddies Billy when his mother knocked at his door again.
"Come on!"
She opened the door "Are you coming to meet the new family across the street with me, Lawrence and Addie?"
Tate laughed "Pffffffft yeah sure mom let me just put on my best clothes – of course I don't want to; I'm playing Xbox here."
"Whos that?" Billy asked
"It's just my mom."
Constance shook her head "Well tidy your damn room up before we get back or else."
With that said she slammed the door and left.
"So, who moved in across the street then? Any hotties?" Billy asked
Tate laughed "Just some family of three. And a dog that looks like a rat."
"Well, did they have a daughter I could maybe get friendly with?"
"Uhm…there was a blonde chick there but I dunno if she was hot; I only saw the back of her head."
"A blonde…hmmm I like it!"
Violet Harmon
"Violet!" She heard her dad yell. She quickly shut off her laptop and walked to the top of the stairs
"Yeah dad?"
"Come down here and meet the Langdons!"
Without hesitation, Violet bounded down the stairs, a smile stuck to her face. She stopped when she saw a blonde woman, a black haired younger girl and a man who just looked old.
"Hi." She spoke up. The blonde woman turned her head to her, eyes looking her up and down before she smiled
"Well hello there dear. I'm Constance this is Addie and that's Larry."
Violet smiled again showing her pearly whites "It's nice to meet you all. I'm Violet."
"We know." Constance replied as she turned back to Vivien "So, show us around?"
Okay so I know it was only short and barley anything has happened yet, but trust me soon it will. This was just the start chapter I was just introducing everything and making sure you guys knew what the 'new' Violet was like! If you liked it then please review ^^ I'll probably update again soon :D