Hello everyone this is my first published fan fiction.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of this.
"So shall we start?" came a questioning tone.
Once upon a time in another place there was an evil kingdom who no one would dare to face and the ruler was a boy so mean. A small little prince of only age fourteen.
I sat there looking at the many furnitures in my room. I waited for my favorite servant who was always on time. Two more minutes. The minutes passed slowly. Then the door creaked open and in he came with my snack.
"Here's you snack, my prince." the shy looking boy stated. We were very much alike with only a few differnces. One eye color, his are purple mine are blue, two he has longer hair, three he is a bit shorter, and four he has a curl that looks like it's almost knotted and I have a piece that comes up and looks like a tilted L(ish) at the top of my head. He is my twin brother many people did not know that though. "Ah, thank you, Matthew." I replied with a smile, "Oh also how many times do I have to tell you stop being so formal. Now how is my favorite horse Josephine?" "Your welcome, I'm sorry uh... a lot. Josephine is doing well, Alfred." Matthew replied embarrased. I walked over to him.
"Mattie, ya know ya don't have to be sorry just please don't be so formal. Ah, that's good. Also how are my riches."
"Okay. Well, Alfred money is rather low at the moment..." Matthew said shifting his feet.
"That's okay we can easily get more from the townspeople who are dangling on a string." I replied with a smile. "And also if they refuse they are obviously trying to bring me down I shall leave it to you to bring them here where they can plead, beg, and tidy up my suit." He bowed to me and I smiled he is such a good little brother. After he left I ate my snack. After finishing my snack I walked over to the window. if these weeds feel they want to stay they'll just die and feed me the same anyway. I snuck out of the castle. In a servants disguise hoping to see the prince I was in love with, Prince Arthur Kirkland. He was the prince of the blue kingdom, he might not have been my fan but that didn't matter. I spotted him with his neighbors boy of green. his eyes shone like green pearls. I was filled with rage. I went back home to make a plan of how to get rid of this boy who stole my love. How? How? That's it! I thought to myself. I went to my brothers room. I sat down on the bed. "Hey Mattie can I ask you a favor?" I asked him. "What is it, Alfred?" Mattie asked back.
"Will you assist me in killing that accursed man of green?" I asked smiling. He started to cry. I could hear him whimpering.
"Alfred you know that's muder. How could you think of such a thing." I knew that's not really what he was worried about. I knew he was in love with that boy.
"Are you saying you won't help your big bro out?" I asked in a pouting tone. He stopped his crying.
"Alfred, I-I-I-I'll so anything for you your my big brother." he replied with puffy eyes.
"That's a good boy Mattie, now eat your pancakes that are smothered in maple syrup and get some rest. Then head out." I said smiling.
"Yes Alfred I will." he said as I walked out. I always got what I wished for from Mattie. A few days go by. Matthew finally comes back and I called the minister that I had locked in a cage.
I looked around making sure no one else was around and whispered to him, "Make sure the green country is destroyed." Houses were burned to the ground. Many people died. Those people that suffered so much pain didn't get pity from the one who ordered them slain.
"Oh, It's tea time and he's late." I said out loud in a worried voice. He threw the door open and said, "Their here." I looked at him like he was crazy. I followed his gaze outside to the window. So they are I thought. It still was not easy to defeat me. The people who revolted were led by a red man mercenary into the night. My army was battered from the green war and their attacks were not much of a chore for the two fighters. The country men surrounded the court. My servants ran away as time was very short. I would not pose a fight, of course, it wasn't nessasary. I was finally captured into the night.
"You're such disrespectful men." was what I said to them. I am to be punished at three o' clock for my crimes. The church bells will resound a tock for me. I, no longer royalty, sit in jail with no loyalty even my own brother has abandoned me. The time finally came, the church bells had a very lame sound. I wouldn't look at the people in the crowd instead I say my last words with my eyes in a shroud. "Oh, It's tea time." Evil flowers steadily bloom with an array of colorful doom. Now the beople speak of him without a second thought. The son of evil has indeed recieved what he sought.
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