Hi guys,
So this is my first ever fanfic so please don't judge.
I would like it if you guys could tell me what I need to work on!
Thanks,
And enjoy!
Prologue
Mabel stared at the trees flying past her.
Dipper stared at Mabel, they were both thinking the same thing: what was their great uncle Stan like?
They got to a bus stop and the driver said, "anyone for Gravity falls, get off now please!"
As they jumped off, a fatman came over to them Mabel, being the most confident of the two, asked him,"are you Soos Ramirez, we're Mabel and Dipper Pines and we've come to see our great uncle Stanford Pines in his tourist trap called The Mystery
/Shack," after she'd finished that sentence she was tired, fell silent and started panting slightly!
Soos just said,"yeah, hambone!"
After they had walked for about a mile into the forest they came up to a rundown little shack with two big signs saying MYSTERY HACK they guessed that it was meant to be mystery shack but they weren't sure.
Once Mabel was inside she nudged Dipper and he saw what she was looking at (as well as the weird displays) in the living room was: their Great Unkle Stan!
Sorry it's quite a shortchapter,the next one will be a lot longer
-ghostbusterscamanderpines? ﾟﾌﾹ