(Me)He you guys. This is a revised version of punishment and curses. As requested by lictor13

(Me)also, guys. I know I have neglected you. So here is a story to make up for my neglectfulness. Hit it!

(Heloise) hit what? With what weapon? and how hard?

(Me) forget it, on with the story.

(Heloise) aren't you forgetting something?

(Me) oh yeah. I don't own jimmy two shoes or the original story... yet. Also there is graphic violence. You have been warned.

it was night time in miseryvill. There was a cool breeze as Heloise was walking home. She walked in a store for some parts for a new invention. She walked up to the desk and wrong the bell. A few minutes later, a teenage girl walked out from behind a door. She wore a kimono and other traditional clothing.

"how may I help you she asked?"

Heloise starts reading of a premade list.

"i will be wright back."

again Heloise waited. This time she noticed a laptop. She opened it and put a small device inside and went back to where she was. The young girl came back and gave her the items.

"it is 300 dollars altogether." the shop keeper said dully.

"make it 200."

"how about 250"

"how about I leave, and set this place on fire?"

the shop keeper taken aback, agreed in fear. "fine, 200."

the small girl picked up her purchased items and left.

The teenager sighed in relief and went back to the door mentioned earlier. Not knowing she would be in a lot of pain soon.

Heloise was now walking to jimmy's house. She took a remote from her pocket and pressed a button. Explosion was herd. "That will teach people not to disagree with me."

jimmy checked his watch wondering where his three best friends where. Requm walked in threw the front door. "hello, how come no one is here yet?" "I don't know." replied jimmy.

Requm sat comfortably on the couch and looked at jimmy with a board expression "maybe they ditched us."

"and miss out on Christmas eve dinner!"

Bezey walked through the front door and sat on another couch. "When will we be able to eat?"

jimmy sighed and herd a bell go of. He ran for the kitchen" my turkey!"

Heloise decided to take a detour. She was to filled with anger, fury and the felling to hurt someone to see her friends. She dropped her stuff of at home before going on her trip. She came to some mans house. She picked the lock , walked in and shut the door quietly. The girl walked upstairs and took something out from her sleeves. She made a creek on the old wooden floors.

The man (peter) woke up to a strange noise. He assumed it was a robber and reached for his gun. He got up and walked out side his room. Heloise was well hidden so she took advantage and struck the man on the head thus knocking him out.

The man woke up tied to a chair. "what the hell is going on?" he received a sharp slap to the face.

"i will be the one asking questions."

the small girl took a sharp kitchen knife ( was in her sleeves earlier.) and plunged it into the man's chest.

He screamed in pain and agony from the sharp object. Heloise smiled as the crimson liquid fell to the floor. She twisted the knife and was rewarded with more screaming.

"Please stop" the man begged. "I will give you anything"

the child smiled darkly an replied "i only want to hear you scream in pain.) he stabbed him several more times before he dropped dead.

The girl made shore there was no evidence and left. She walked to jimmy's house, now finaly getting rid of the feeling and smiled. "that was fun". "Third person this month."

(me I know. Its dark. Bit I warned you. This is no longer a one shot.

(Heloise) why am I crazy?

(me) I am following the pilot stuff.

(Heloise) oh.

(Me,Heloise) later and review. Or Heloise will find you.

(me) just kidding but please review.