Saving Narnia
Stuck in a boring classroom were four very important children that would change the future of a world forever but they didn't know that. They thought they were just normal 12 year olds waiting for the Christmas holidays to start. All the children were sat in their seats waiting for 3 o'clock so they could leave but then there teacher the horrible miss Cole gave then homework they had to work in groups over the holidays. She read out the groups she came to the main characters in the story Charles Andrews , William Stevens , Lillian pevensie and Sophia smith as she finished reading out the names the clock changed to 3 o'clock and all the children ran for the door trying to get out first as you may have guest they didn't really like school.
As they got out of the class room the four children decided that later that day they would meet at Lillian's house to do the homework. So they all walked home and changed out of their ugly uniforms into some more comfortable clothes and went to Lillian's house. When they got there they stood with their mouths handing open looking at a huge mansion. Then Lillian came outside and laughed and said "a friend of my dads left this for him when he died its lovely isn't it"
"its massive " replied William still looking shocked
They went inside and into the living room and got all their stuff out ready to do their homework when lillians dad came in and twin brother who was also in their class came in.
"hello I am peter pevensie it is nice to meet you I think you know my son Arthur" said her father
"its nice to meet you to your house is lovely the swords on the walls are amazing by the way" said Charles
"thank you I love the swords to I teach Arthur how to sword fight just in case" replied peter then he started talking about lots of sword techniques that none of them were listening to. After about an half an hour of this he left to go do some work.
So the four finally got to go the homework after doing that for an hour William got bored and decided to tease Sophia and Charles "you two would make a great couple " said William Charles and Sophia went bright red and Lillian said just to make them go even redder "your right they would" with a smirk on her face. So Charles jumped up from his seat and ran after William and Lillian they all ran through the house trying to avoid running into suits of armour or statues Lillian and William came to a room that was empty except for a large wardrobe they could hear Charles and Sophia running after them so they ran into the wardrobe to hide. Once in the wardrobe the went as far back as possible but they kept going back they turned around expecting to find the back of the wardrobe .But instead the found a forest with snow on the ground and looked like it belonged on the front of a Christmas card. Then Charles and Sophia came in and looked around shocked "how is this possible ?" questioned Sophia
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