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Soft Spot
CHAPTER 1
Italics=Thoughts
Bold=Summary and Ending
Dan was a cold-hearted killer, invincible… well almost. He considered his last shred of humanity as a weakness, something to be feared… and for no one to know. This is a story telling of how he found this weakness.
Dan snarled, as he couldn't get past the ghost shield now surrounding Amity Park. Valerie chuckled and said "There's no place for you here now." Dan realized it was no use. He said, "Fine, but this shield will not last forever, and I'll be back. He flew away towards the next town. I'll be back, he thought. He felt sorrow as he flew away from his home, but quickly pushed it away.
"It is just a weakness", he muttered.
8 Years Later
Dan was flying through the city; it didn't even look like a city anymore, more like a pile of ruble. He chuckled darkly and admired his work. He thought to himself time to go to the next town. He took of in blazingspeeds looking for the nearest town. As he was flying he muttered, "This would be so much easier if I had a map."
He came upon a town about 25 miles from the last. He dropped to the ground so he wouldn't be seen; he wanted to surprise the pitiful humans. He mumbled, "I'll need to disguise as a human." He concentrated and felt all too familiar blue rings form at his waist. In Dan's place stood a muscular man with black hair tied back in a ponytail, pale skin, and dark piercing blue eyes. He was wearing a black t-shirt, jeans, and boots.
This will do perfectly. He then stepped out onto the street, and walked down the street… something he had not done in 8 years. He passed many people. He wanted to kill them so badly. He told himself there is time for that later. He continued walking until a red vapor his ghost sense came from his nose, there's someone behind me he thought.
Dan whipped around He felt a tear slowly go down his face as he whispered "Dani". She looked older than he remembered, her hair was longer, her face more mature, and more importantly bright green eyes staring right at him. Then she hesitantly asked "Dann-y, is th-at you?"
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