Herro everyone!

This is my first time writing not only a gajeelXlucy story it's also my first time ever writing a fairy tail story so I would love some constructive criticism….

Lucy says,"shouldn't you be doing the disclaimer right about now?!"

halosakura replies," I was getting to it... so dang bossy Are you sure you're not erza in disguise?"

Lucy yells," ...WOMEN GET ON TO IT DAMMIT!"

halosakura sweat drops then quietly says," (gulps) x.x please don't send aqeriuous on me I'm begging you okay look I'm doing the disclaimer now so don't seek her on me…."

~Disclaimer: I do not own fairy tail so don't sue me..!~

~In magnolia at the fairy tail guild~

Lucy burst into the guild looking very pissed off and starts to walk towards team natsu and lisanna

erza notices how pissed off Lucy is and was about to get up and walk over to her and ask her what's eating at her when Lucy shouts,"YOU FUCKING BASTERD HOW COULD YOU!"

Lucy was standing at the table looking at natsu and lisanna with a mixture of hatred, betrayal, and hurt.

Erza looks at natsu then Lucy and says," what's going on Lucy?!" Lucy starts bursting out crying and Mira,cana, juvia who was hiding in the corner spying on grey(cough, cough like a stalker... jk) and levy come running over asking what's wrong and try to comfort her…

Erza the glares towards natsu and yells," what the hell happened?!"

natsu gulps then tries to run away screaming "it just happened!"while erza tries to catch natsu Lucy starts to shake and then she screams at no one in

particular I trusted you…why did you do this to me..?... I loved you…I fought for you! I cried for you…! How could you cheat on me with her! Lucy points to lisanna.

Everyone in the guild was shocked about natsu cheating on her but also felt bad for fairy tails own celestial wizard… Mira looks from Lucy to natsu then finally to her little

sister and says," lisanna is what Lucy is saying true?"

lisanna starts to smirk and looks at Lucy then to her big sister Mira

and replies," no natsu and I are just friends I don't know where she got this from but its false…."

Lucy finally had enough and loses it she yells at both of the takeover mages she looks at lisanna and says," you fucking lying slut! I saw you and natsu fucking in natsu house how dare you call me a liar you bitch!" and then she turns around to look at

Mira with a look of hurt and betrayal and quietly says," Mira how can you not believe me I thought you were my friend….why?... ?"

she gets out of cana and levys arms and runs out of the guild crying….

A/N: Hey yall please review and msg me if you want to co-write a story…..and how did I do on this? Should I continue or should I stop?