Love On the Rise
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto just this story.
This story begins after the tree top scene not as a flashback but as a true happening. This is my first story and fan fiction ever and I would like if you tell me your thoughts on it and how to make it better. I'm not afraid of criticism I am open to any it can only make me a better writer. I have some trouble with grammar and spelling so please point those out to me so when I am truly done with the story I can rewrite it in the future.
Chapter1: Day of Notice
Normal Pov.
"You ARE a great addition to the villages Kushina." Minato softly said as jumped off the tree and on to a narrow path that would lead them back to the village. The dark path full of life was gave off astonishing beauty as the glow of the full moons grace light the way as the two pre-teens make their way home. There was an uncomfortable silence just after minute of what he had announce , so he tried to break the ice to get the only girl he has ever looked at with unknown passion.
"I had always wanted to get closer and get to know you better Kushina. Even though I though I am a prodigy and have eleven real friends that I can depend on. I also have things I am troubled with things (like fan girls and confessing my feelings) and I would like it if we can become friends." Minato said trying to hold back his embarrassment.
"Yeah I would like that but…IF YOU DO ANYTHING IDIOTIC I WON'T HESITATE TO BEAT YOU TO A PULP DATTBANE!" Kushina yelled the quickly covered her mouth at her slip up. Then she took a side ways glance at him to see his reaction and was momentary surprised.
Minato only chuckled and said "Wouldn't have it any other way," Barley eve noticing her blush
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After an hour they finally made it to the village that they loved and came to love. Kushina was so happy to see the old red and green gate of the village that she forgot that she was still in Minato's arms.
"Oohmm… Minato…ohm" Kushina hesitated.
"Yes Kushina" Minato said calmly
"Oohm... you can put down now dattbane." She said as her blush darkened but still not able to bet her hair.
"Not until I get you to the Konoha, hospital," Minato said with confidence.
Before she could protest he used his inhuman speed to run to the hospital and in less then a minute they were there. Soon after Minato check her in.
Sorry this chapter is short and I maybe a little slow on up dating. I will try to up date regularly. Next update won't be a chapter but a chapter listing. Think you for reading. : 9