Moshi Moshi everyone Golden Goddess here and welcome to my first story on fanfiction!
I would appreciate some constructive criticism would surly help so don't be afraid to give some harsh feedback.
Disclaimer: I don't own Pokémon characters, setting or Pokémon it self
ENJOY!
Dawn Berlitz stared at the dark velvet sky dotted with sliver in deep thought. Her light blue starter Pokémon Piplup, sleeping peacefully in her lap unaware of his trainer troubles. It's been a few weeks since she saw her two best friends and Travelling companions, Ash and Broke departed from Sinnoh back to their home region Kanto.
Her face scrunched up when she recalled a certain ebony-haired trainer. Ash. Why did blood rush to her face and her heart bump faster whenever she hears his name? Ash was unlike any boy she ever met. He would always put his friends and Pokémon first himself second. When she first met him, he nearly risk is life to save a yellow mouse like Pokémon also known as his Pikachu. After that the two began an instant bond .He even took time out of his busy schedule to train her to achieve her dream ,becoming a top Coordinator like her mother, Johanna Berlitz. But his heart of gold wasn't the only thing she noticed about him. Years of travelling across the many regions left him with a toned chest with a delicious six- pack. His unruly raven black hair has gotten longer and framed his face perfectly. White Skin became a nice, even golden brown from the unforgiving sun. He outgrew his boyish features becoming that of a handsome young adult. She blushed as her thoughts began to wander and quickly shock her head mentally scolding herself for thinking such perverted thoughts. All future thoughts were ceased when Piplup awoken from his slumber
"Oh sorry Piplup did I disturb you? "Dawn whispered to the penguin. Piplup gave a tired yawn in response. "Come on I think it's time we went to bed. "Dawn said as she left the perch on her window and descended upon her bed. As she began to drift in too deep sleep, her mind once again fell on the on the trainer." Ash will I ever see you again" she thought before deep sleep consumed her.
Well what do you think? Once again I would like some feedback
Well anyway I better go Audie!