Star Trek: Unintended Consequences
Hello readers. For those familiar with my previous story, "Humanity Lost", this story should be pretty familiar. Well, after hitting a wall in that story, I decided to re-work it from the ground up. The characters are still the same, but the story will take several different twists and turns to get everybody where I want them. I'm trying to eliminate the technobabble and the different/alternate time periods/universes and just tell a good story. Please read and review and tell me if you like the new direction. Or tell me if you hate it and wish I would drop off the face of the Earth. If you're going to do that though, at least leave me some constructive criticism to go by. Just trying to entertain here.
-Ray Bundy