Please review my first story I wrote
How it all started
Zero wake up in a big room, he know it wasn't his room. The last thing he remember was being at a party and having a drink, then was feeling dizzy. He started to thinking that someone drugged him, something snapped he out of his daydream he looked more round to see a body on top of his. "GET THE HELL OFF OF ME YOU BASTARD" he yelled.
"Um why so mad Kiryu" the guy said, Zero know that voice anyway "KURAN WHAT THE HELL" he said. Kaname looked up and smirked "what don't you remember what happen at the party Zero" he said, he moved his body off of Zero making he groan. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING A AAAH hah" Zero started talking but Kaname moved more.
Zero felt movement inside of him, "oh your body so sensitive still" kaname said, Kaname moved more making Zero groaning "look your get so hard again" Kaname said as he started licking Zero's ear down on his neck. Zero panted more and more as Kaname moved inside him again "what are you do hah aah ing to me hah" he said as he moaned, "don't you remember you get drunk and seduced me" Kaname said.
Zero panted heavier the more and more Kaname moved "what gooing on aaah hah" Zero breath, Kaname licked Zero hear again whispering in his hear "your so tight inside Zero" Kaname said, "it making me want to fuck you harder." "What" Zero said kaname moved Zero legs more and pull out of him then slammed back in hard making Zero gasped.
Kaname moved more and more in and out of Zero going deeper in Zero tight hole "what aah are hah ahh you aaah haa doinng" as Zero try to speak to Kaname as he pulled out again push back in harder and deeper in Zero making him cum on his stomach, kaname pulled him legs up thrusting inside of him. Kaname moaned and called Zero name loud as he cum inside of Zero. Zero cum again as Kaname was still coming inside of him, he moved Zero hair away from his eyes. Kaname finally moved out of Zero as he moved to the side of the bed next to Zero he kissed is head saying "good night to Zero."
Hope the grammar is a little bit better, plan to add more to this chapter along with more to come.