Hey Guys,
This is my first story so be warned there will probably be some grammatical errors
I appreciate feedback if it's negative or positive, please be honest. I hope you like my story/fan fiction
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I paced the cold linoleum floor of the Lincoln Hospital of New York. My mom had called me down here and now I was just waiting for her to show up. I wondered why she called me here. Was someone sick, do I have another relative whom I have never met? I thought of the conversation I had with Jace in my head, his words did little to comfort the pang of guilt I had in my gut. I heard one of the doors creak open,
"Are you okay?" A nurse asked "You look like you came out of the sewer. So basically I'm sayin, gurl, you nasty!"
I stood back in shock of her words and did not know how to answer.
"Sally!" a slightly older nurse called out "you don't talk to people like that!" Sally rolled her eyes and answered "Sorry Melinda" and started to file her nails.
Melinda sighed and rolled her eyes and said "sorry about Sally here, it is her first day of work and she doesn't really know how..." she paused and took a long look at my face said
"Oh honey are you ok? You look like you just went through one on the most traumatic experiences in your life." I wanted to say, Yeah well it's definitely not, but while you asked my boyfriend's on fire and it's my fault, all of my friends are basically mythical creatures, and on top of that my brothers some psychopath who wants to destroy the world. But no I couldn't say that it might make her think I'm a patient from the mental health ward who got lost.
So Instead I just said "No everything is fine thanks, I'm just waiting for my mom." At that very minute I heard a voice that called
"Clary?" I turned around to see my mom, Luke, and Brother Zachariah making their way towards me. I wiped my eyes and looked down at my hands to see them covered with mascara. No wonder everyone had been asking me if I was alright.
"I can see that your mom is here, me and Sally have something to do have a nice day" Melinda said cheerfully not seeming to be freaked out by Brother Zachariah at all, then I mentally slapped my self. Of course she's not freaked out she's a mundane probably cant see him.
I was snapped out of my trance as my mom said "Clary we have something very important to talk to you about" as she gestured to her, Luke, and Brother Zachariah.
"Sure what about?" I asked trying to make my voice sound light and failing miserably.
"Come with us and we'll show you" Brother Zachariah spoke in my mind as he led the three of us down one of the hallways.
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So yeah this is the first part of my story I really hope you guys like it I will try and post at least once a week but I am very likely going to break this promise so please don't be angry with me if you don't see a update every week. Again I really appreciate feedback so don't hesitate to give me any.
Ciao my lovely readers