A.N. Hey everyone! This is my first fic! critique and tips on how to improve would be greatly appreciated! thanks!

Also, The first character that appears in a paragraph is the the cat we are focusing on!

Bounding out of camp, eyes welling up with tears, Leafpool's soft, delicate paws churned the earth as she began to catch up with her mate. Thunderclan has betrayed me, the only cat I can trust is him now. Leafpool sighs as she quickened her pace. She noticed Crowfeather sitting by himself, and yowled at him. "Hey Crowfeather! we're not finished yet!" Her voice quickly changed into an enthusiastic tone as she pounced onto her mate.

"Leafpool! you followed me?" Crowfeather purred with lust as he allowed Leafpool's tail to tickle his member's sheath. "Of course, where else, and who else could I have gone to?" Leafpool replied, rubbing her muzzle against his, a purring sensation filling the air. "You weren't that hard to find, either, this is where we first had our meetings, surely you can remember that?" She added, licking his ear and rolling beside him.

Crowfeather shut his eyes as the breeze rustled his thin fur, quickly glancing at Leafpool. "We never got the chance to really... enjoy ourselves..." He sighed as he gazed back up at the sky. Leafpool just smiled back at him, happy feelings swelling through her. Should we do it here? it's quiet, and the river should block any noise. Leafpool wondered. Crowfeather had been staring at Leafpool with a cheeky grin on his face. Leafpool nodded, signalling for him to begin the mating process with her.

Crowfeather blinked a subtle reply as he clambered over the small she cat, licking Leafpool's dusky-brown face to set the mood for the both of them. He felt his member unsheath as Leafpool tickled it with her tail a little more, matching his loving licks. Crowfeather started to trail his passionate rasps of his tongue down towards Leafpool's sensitive core.

Crowfeather hesitated for a moment, but Leafpool nodded again, and he continued, passing his tongue over it. Small purrs sounded from Leafpool as he continued to pass her core. Crowfeather suddenly couldn't handle Leafpool's core being so dry and untouched, so he dove his tongue into her core, licking it furiously as Leafpool's juices leaked from it.

Leafpool was instantly moaning as she thrusted her hips upwards and took Crowfeather's tongue deep into her interior and she cried out. "Keep going Crowfeather! I'm going to cum!" She moaned, pleasure and lust filling the air. Leafpool felt her climax release into Crowfeather's mouth as she jerked into him, cum leaking down her flanks. exhausted, she collapsed, and so did Crowfeather, he was laying vertically ontop of Leafpool, panting heavily.

"Want more?" Crowfeather mumured, gazing at Leafpool. "Maybe later, let's rest for now..." Leafpool panted, and blacked out from exhaustion. Leafpool woke feeling a cold breeze running through her fur. Crowfeather had woken up, too, and was gazing at her. "I think i'm ready." Leafpool purred as Crowfeather licked her face. Leafpool stretched and yawned, lowering her back a little, and felt Crowfeather's thin frame mount her stocky, minature form. He began to tease her, rubbing his member onto the entrance of her core's expanded slit.

"I know it'll be painful, just get the hard part over with, please." Leafpool moaned as Crowfeather dove inside of her, braking through her barrier as Leafpool gasped with pain as the barbs of his averaged-sized shaft brushed her interior. "Leafpool

.. you feel so good, and tight." Crowfeather moaned. "Crowfeather! I think I've made it to my climax-" Leafpool moaned with pleasure as she felt her cum burst out of her core, and Crowfeather into hers.

Crowfeather unhauled himself from her and they were both exausted again. "Promise me, we'll do that again." he panted. A yowl was heard from somepoint on the moor, and the pair turned around in shock of the cat who had let out such noise. It was Nightcloud.

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Gotcha with a Clifhanger haha. Sorry about the short chapter, gradually, these will get longer! Chapter 2 should arrive later this week depending on my motivation.

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