The New Shur'tugal Chapter 1: She Meets Eragon, an inheritance cycle fanfic

This person Leahwannabe479 are both making a modern day dragon rider story. We're having this contest type thing to see which one gets a better response. So Yeah. Here's mine!!!!! Oh yeah I hate writing in this form so I might slip up.

Disclainer!!!! Oh my god! I hate these! OK I do not own any one in this but the people you may not have heard of including Sarah. Things like OC's. Yeah I know, I blab too much. On with the story!!!! Se onr sverdar sitja hvass!! :P

I'm in the business of misery, let's take it from the top
She's got a body like an hourglass that's tickin' like a clock
It's a matter of time before we all run out...
When I thought he was mine, she caught him by the mouth

I waited eight long months, she finally set him free
I told him I couldn't lie, he was the only one for me
Two weeks, two weeks and we'd caught on fire
She's got it out for me, but I wear the biggest smile

Whoa, I never meant to brag
But I got him where I want him now
Whoa, it was never my intention to brag
To steal it all away from you now
But God does it feels so good
'Cause I got him where I want him now
And if you could then you know you would
'Cause God it just feels so...
It just feels so good

Second chances they don't ever matter, people never change
Once a whore, you're nothing more, I'm sorry that'll never change
And about forgiveness, we're both supposed to have exchanged
I'm sorry honey, but I passed it up, now look this way!

Well there's a million other girls who do it just like you
Looking as innocent as possible to get to you,
They want and what they like, it's easy if you do it right
Well I refuse, I refuse, I refuse!

Whoa, I never meant to brag
But I got him where I want him now
Whoa, it was never my intention to brag
To steal it all away from you now
But God does it feel so good
'Cause I got him where I want him right now
And if you could then you know you would
'Cause God it just feels so...
It just feels so good...

I watched his wildest dreams come true
And not one of them involving you
Just watch my wildest dreams come true
Not one of them involving...

Whoa, I never meant to brag
But I got him where I want him now...

Sarah was walking home from school. She hated it. Sarah could not sit still for more than 4 hours. Ok less than that, but still a very short time. Her life was so boring. She wished that she could have a life like people in the books she'd read. Books like Twilight, Percy Jackson and the Olympians, and Artemis Fowl. "Why!!?" She shouted aloud, Everyone within a 30 foot radius stared at her." Sorry everyone just having a bad day". They all went back to their business. Sarah pulled out her nano and put on Misery Business. She sang out loud quietly.

I waited eight long months, she finally set him free
I told him I couldn't lie, he was the only one for me
Two weeks and we'd caught on fire
She's got it out for me, but I wear the biggest smile

Well there's a million other girls who do it just like you
Looking as innocent as possible to get to you,
They want and what they like, it's easy if you do it right
Well I refuse, I refuse, I refuse!

I watched his wildest dreams come true
And not one of them involving you
Just watch my wildest dreams come true
Not one of them involving...

Whoa, I never meant to brag
But I got him where I want him now...

She sighed when the song was over, content. Then she realized she was at her front door. How could anyone miss that? She smacked herself for being for stupid, and then she unlocked and walked in the door. She saw the familiar brown couches in front of the TV that was grey. Covered with junk from when she sat there and wasted time. The kitchen had an island and a bar covered in dishes and food.

Then Sarah remembered-she didn't know how she forgot in the first place- today was her 12th birthday. Wow! Everyone was probably setting up a surprise party. Amazing. How could anyone forget their birthday? Ugg it was almost a disgrace. Whatever. Then she ran to my old computer to check her fan fiction email. Let's see what was updated while she was at school. Ummm The Impossible Plan, and Awkward. Hmm She read The Impossible Plan.

Then there was a deafening boom and a blinding flash,

" What the Heck!?!?!?!?!" she shouted.

"It is *cough cough* Ok. You are needed"

"What do you mean? Who are you?" she yelled. Then she felt some thing trying to get inside her mind. She froze, fighting to keep it out.

"Mhhm, very Advanced.", the stranger said

"What are you talking about? And tell me who you are!!!!"

"Very Well. I am" he paused for a moment. "Bergan".

"Ok. What were you talking about!!!!!!!".

"Grab my arm." he demanded.

"No, why should I?". Then he grabbed her arm. He uttered some weird words and the word seemed to spin. There was a multitude of colors spinning in circles, as if the universe itself were altering. Then it stopped Sarah stumbled and gasped. She fell on some dirt and coughed for a few minutes until her attack stopped. She took a deep breath and took a look at her surroundings. There was desert, which she was used to, she lived in Arizona. The sky seemed red. There were tents and armies. But not regular armies. They each wore a mail, helm, shield and sword.

"Where am I?" she asked. This was not her computer room.

"You are in Alagaesia".

She nodded and then felt the thing that had snuck into her mind earlier again. This time she let it through. It went through all her memories. Some she didn't want to think about. When the force saw that it was in a sensitive place, it stopped and went somewhere else. When it was gone she sighed in relief. It was disconcerting to feel some one or thing else in your mind.

"My real name is Eragon, I apologize for lying earlier, and you are Sarah. Am I right?"

"Yes, you're right. Who are you Eragon, I just seemed to notice you have pointed ears".

"I am a dragon rider; my dragon Saphira is right on top of us". Eragon pointed to a sparkling blue blotch in the sky.

"I'll bet she's the most beautiful ... anything in the land". Then Sarah heard a low humming sound.

Why thank you Sarah. You are most kind. It was a strange sensation, having a dragon in your mind. It seemed they were great, wild animals, yet civilized.

"Why am I here? What's special about me?" Sarah asked.

"You asked a lot of questions. As to the answers I cast a spell that sent me to people of importance of the future or past and I sent me straight to you.".

"Can I ride your dragon?" That was the most important question right now to her.

"Of coarse. Be back by dusk"

"What that's only like 1 hour."

"Make due. I need her at dusk.

"Fine" I groaned." Can I talk to her?" She assumed it would be rude to just start talking.

"Yes you may"

Saphira! Hi. Oh my god. I'm talking to a dragon. Sorry, Ok did you know one of my ears is slightly pointed? Sorry, I talk way too much, but this is overwhelming.

Quite all right young one.

So can we go to the woods?

Even thought her mind was still open to mine she said, Eragon, I like this one. She doesn't treat me like an animal.

Thank you Saphira!!! You rock!

What does "rock" mean. I've never heard it used like that before.

It means.....you are the best! So are we going to the woods?

Of course little one.

They flew through the sky to the woods. It was an amazing sensation. Like you were a kite flying in the wind in a monsoon. When they got to the woods SAaphira landed. She said that she could fly through trees.

I'll meet you back here in 15 minutes. K?

All right. 15 minutes.

Sarah ran through the trees laughing. She'd never felt so free. Then she had an idea. She could kill a deer for Saphira. Sarah ran and ran until she felt something that wasn't there a minute ago appear out of thin air. It was an aqua stone. More of a Turquoise actually. It had vibrant blue streaks running through it and the weirdest part was.... it felt alive. She picked it up and stuffed in her shirt. Back to the deer, she thought. Luckily she found a doe. It was easy to catch because it had a broken leg. It was also another way to hide the stone, Sarah thought.

"Hi", Sarah greeted Saphira.

Welcome back.

Thanks. Look what I found!!! She showed her the deer and moved the stone to her back. she had the feeling she had to hide it.

Why thank you. That's one of the nicest things anyone's ever done for me.

You're welcome.

They flew back in silence. When they saw Eragon, Saphira started to land. When they were 20 feet above the ground Sarah jumped. She hooted until she hit the ground. "That was awesome". Then the stone fell. Unluckily Eragon was already there making sure she was alright. When he saw the stone he turned pale. Then he smiled like nothing was wrong.

"Where's you find that?" he asked, almost too casually.

"The forest" She replied.

"You should keep that in your tent. Guard it and take in wherever you go. Ok? But first you have to meet Nasuada."

"Alright?" she said, still suspicious.

Eragon walked in a red tent. Sarah hesitated but followed soon after.

There was a woman with bandages on her arms in a dress. I guessed that it was Nasuada.

"Hello, your majesty?" I said unsure. I mean there was no royalty in the United States.

"Oh please don't call me that, call me....." Then the stone started rocking back and forth in the bag I was carrying....................

Hi people. So like I said once you read mine, could you read Leahwannabe479's ? Just to see which one gets a better responce.