Ok this is just an idea that popped up into my head while I was on DA soo here it goes. Oh and BTW this IS NOT a story YET because I want to finish my other fic 'my sinful butterfly' and because I wanted and opinion/vote on weather this is good enough to become a story.
He bit her, his fangs punctured her soft skin, deep red blood appeared out of the mark which soon mingled with her ivory complexion.
Crimson tears made their way down his chin as he softly drank from the bite mark. He wouldn't stop, He couldn't stop. Her sent was intoxicating and her blood was so sweet and pure, he craved it.
But he knew if he drank too much of her sweet blood, it could lead to her death. Not wanting that, he gently disconnected his fangs from her slender neck and stared into her half-lidded beautiful emerald eyes.
Her hand came up to his pale face and used her thumb to gently caress his bottom lip, smearing the red substance that dwelled there, at the same time he let his hand tenderly stroke her cheek.
"Did i hurt you?" He whispered quietly, his voice was as smooth a silk as every work left his blood red lips.
"No, you didn't hurt me..." She replied gracefully as she gave him a warm smile, her vision getting darker by the second and her body nearly falling limp in his arms.
Realizing this, he gently picked her up bridal style and placed her on her soft white bed.
He then quietly pulled up a chair and sat beside her bedside, softly grasping her hand in his.
"Don't worry, I'm here..." He assured her, using her free hand to wipe the remaining blood off of his chin.
"Arigatou...sasuke...kun..."
So tell me what you think please!