This is my first story since I usually write poems. Need opinions please! Enjoy

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A stormy night had fallen on the small town of Karakura. The lights are out for it was late; around three in the morning actually. Voices were still heard in a small ally way between a couple. A young girl was holding around her boyfriend at the waist as she is crying tears which seem never ending.

"Satoru wait! Please stop this. Why do you still hang out with them? They are with the gangs here and I'm worry about you. You've changed!

"Shut up Mitsuki! I have not changed at all. I'm still the same person and if you love me then you would understand. I'm doing this for you, for us!"

"If it's for us then I don't want to be a part of it. I can't stand it anymore, all the stealing and killing; everything. I won"t stand for it anymore."

The young girl turned away and walked out of the ally and head on home late in the night with the ill-tempered young man going after her.

"Where are you going? Home? After everything that happens you're just going to leave me?"

She stops and glares back at her love with streams of tears running down her face.

"Yes. You want me to spell it for you? I'm also going to the police about you and those thugs before anyone gets hurt. I still care about you and you know where I will be when you care."

The young woman turned around again and start walking but the young man turned red and malicious as he pulled out a small knife from his pocket charging at her like the devil himself. He took her by the arm facing him and stabbed her right at the heart. The young girl's face turned pale and wide eyed seeing his calm teal eyes turning red as a maniac as he cradles close seeing what he has done and now crying.

"Don't leave me...why do you want to leave? I did everything for you and yet you want to leave...why...why?!?!

Her eyelids grew heavy as blood now coming out of her mouth and now her love panics hearing noises coming out from the ally. He turns around franticly and pulled out the knife from her chest and dropped her on the floor and ran terrified. She was a lifeless doll that was trampled over on the sidewalk as her body is getting blue still crying tears with the last moment of life still at her fingertips gasping.

"Am I...going to die now? He...I trust him...loved him... and now I'm going to die."

She glances up to the sky cursing at the rain and then a shadow covers her as her eyes shift to whatever it was. It's only a silhouette of a young woman in a black kimono staring down at her.

"Please...leave me alone...I don't want anyone."

"Don't worry..."

The silhouette spoke softly and calm.

"In a minute you will be at a better place, I promise."

The young girl closed her eyes for the last time as the girl in the black kimono guides her to a new and hopefully a better life as a hell butterfly flies to the cleared night straight to the moon.

Prologue done! To me it seems to be a little fast but I want to get to the good part. It's going to be good and I'm open to opinions and critics. Ja ne