Disclaimer: This is a fan-made story based on the Metroid Prime 2 Echoes™ video game franchise by Nintendo™. All characters in this story are the property of their respective owners.

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Metroid: Enter Exeter

Data cycle 07.014.2 (Cosmos)

Final report, GFMC Task force Herakles

Exeter, A.C Commanding

While on patrol in the Dasha system, we engaged an unknown Space Pirate Frigate……

Exeter woke abruptly in the middle of his sleep cycle, alerting one of his comrades. It took him several minutes to remember where he was. He was commanding captain on board the Tyr, an Anhur class State-of-the-art warship, patrolling the Dasha system. It took him another split second to realize someone was speaking to him.

"Captain? anything wrong?" asked Angseth, who had just entered the cockpit. Exeter looked at her for a second, trying to grasp what she had said, and replied, "No, I'm fine. Just… a nightmare, that's all… You should get back to your seat; sensors are picking up a disturbance. It could be trouble. "

The female comms officer simply nodded and left. While he was asleep, he had a premonition of coming danger. He glanced over to the troop seats, and saw them in their sleep cycles, undisturbed. He had the premonition several times today; in his guts, his stomach, and his dreams. It was as if his body was trying to warn him about some thing. But what? he thought. He had not seen hide nor skin of trouble anywhere, and the disturbance on his sensors was too small to even be a disturbance. Nothing could possibly go wrong. And that's when started to go wrong.

BOOM

A laser Cannon hit the ship, and out of nowhere, a space pirate ship began pummeling the Tyr, scorching the ships paintjob and causing damage. The ship violently rocked as Exeter began identifying the target. As the sensors confirmed that the ship was definitely of space pirate design, he hollered into the comm unit, "Code red! Code red! We have a Space Pirate Frigate on our tail! We are ready to engage. Get to your stations!"

He began a series of loops and weaves, doing the best of his abilities to shake of the aggressor. He then hit the inertial speed dampeners, which stopped the ship in midspace. The space frigate flying at nearly top, sped forward, now being the hunted. As it saw its chance of victory extinguished, it attempted to retreat, but he was not going to let that happen. The Tyr began blasting the Frigate, causing an enormous amount of damage. Exeter converted all energy from the shields to the weapons and engines, magnifying the ships strength. He was surprised that the frigate was still holding. Space Pirates ships were not supposed to be that strong. As the ship took more and more damage, the pirates aboard were becoming desperate.

BOOM!

The Pirates ships engines exploded, sending it plummeting toward a strange planet. Exeter checked his sensors, which showed the planet called Aether. Its skies were auburn, then changed to a darkish purple. He had never seen an atmosphere like this. His premonition seemed to be coming true. He gave chase and followed the Pirates to this mysterious planet………

………….The enemy Frigate was crippled, and crashed on the planet Aether. We followed the Pirates, but our ship was damaged by a storm by a storm as we entered Aethers atmosphere. Heavy magnetic activity during the storm disabled our comm Systems. Upon landing we split into two groups: one to set up an ops base, the other to repair the ship. Each unit was doing fine, no problem……

Until they appeared…..