Like many of you, I was supremely disapointed with the lame "I didn't
feel anything" bit at the end of last week's show. So here's my take
on a more J/H 'shiper friendly ending. This is my
first J/H fanfic.
Disclaimer: Don't own them, never will, I'll cry a river, build a
bridge and get over it I supose.
Title: On Second Thought
Pairing: Duh Jackie and Hyde
Scene: Picks up where last week's episode left off. Hyde and Jackie
are returning from their first date. 'Nuff said.
Steven Hyde gently helped Jackie into the car and shut the door. He
stalked over to the driver side and slid in. They drove in silence
each lost in their own thoughts.
How could she not have felt it?! It was short but it had been one of
the best kisses of his life. He cared for her more than anybody else
he knew, and as much as the thought scared him, it also thrilled
him. And she hadn't felt it! Damnit, now what was he supposed to
do?
Jackie replayed the kiss over and over in her own mind. It was
sweet, and passionate at the same time. It was her Steven finally
kissing her, so why wasn't she more excited? Perhaps they simply
hadn't given it enough time to build into what she had expected.
After all she had been obsessing about him all summer long, so maybe
they simply needed to try again.
Jackie was drawn out of her thoughts when she realized that Hyde was
driving towards the water tower. "Steven where are we going?" she
curiously aske.
"I'll tell you when we get there," he replied with a smirk on his
face.
"Whatever," she said shrugging her shoulders.
They reached the water tower and he parked the car then walked around
to the other side to open her door. "Come on," he encouraged her
gently reaching down and taking her hand in his own. They walked to
the latter hands entwined in a comfortable silence. With a
mischevious glint in his eyes he turned her around and placed her on
the second rung of the latter urging her to climb up.
"No Steven, I don't like heights!" she exclaimed.
"Don't worry I'll be right behind you, ya won't fall," he stated as
he casually stepped into position behind her. Feeling reasured she
began to climb and relished in Steven's close proximity. She sudenly
stopped about halfway up causing him to brush up right behind her,
and she knew he had been lying when he said he hadn't felt anything.
Turning her head around she arched an eyebrow and coyly stated " Is
that the 'nothing' you felt Steven?" His jaw dropped open, and
pleased by his reaction she scurried up the latter.
He silently collected his composure before joining her on the top of
the water tower. He silently vowed to show her exactly what he had
felt, but had been too stuborn to admit the first time around.
Aproaching her he grabbed her around the waist and pulled her flush
against his chest. He dipped his head and ravished her neck with
his toungue, teeth and lips. He heard her draw in a shaky breath and
smiled to himself at the effect he had on her. Dragging his mouth up
to her ear he whispered "Now can you say that you don't feel
anything?"
Jackie turned the tables on him by arching her neck back and gently
suckeling on his neck just above his tee shirt. "Only if you don't"
she murmered against his skin. Unable to stand it anymore he
skilfully rolled her over so she was stradeling his lap and facing
him. His face grew serious as he asked, " Jackie, I told you, but
you never told me, what did you think of our first date?" She smiled
and descended on his mouth, prying his lips open and snaking her
toungue into his mouth in one fluid moment. Her actions drew a low
moan from him and satisfied she pulled away. "Does that answer your
question?" she asked him. In response he simply growled and ground
their mouths together again. Toungues danced together as they very,
very, VERY thourougly explored each others mouths. Their kiss was
passionate and tender, anaimalistic and reverent. Only the basic
need for oxygen broke the contact and they broke away heavily
panting.
Still recovering from their passionate embrace Jackie leaned her head
against his chest and sighend with contentment. He wrapped his arms
around her and happily played with her hair, surprised by the fact
that he could be so happy doing something he considered to be so
girly. They clung to each other for a long time until Steven spoke.
"Jackie?"
"Hmmm?" she asked lifting her head off of him.
"My ass fell asleep." She chuckled and got off of him. He got to
his feet, and they climbed back down to the earth and walked joyously
back to the car.
"Steven?"
"Yes dear?"
"On our next date, let's go somewhere where we can move around more,
ok?"
He shot her a sideways glance and grined as he replied "You know, I'm
still not opposed to doing it." She playfully slapped him and got
into the car. Steven walked around and couldn't keep a smile off of
his face as he thought about the fact that he had just gone a first
date with a girl he once called a tick. On second thought, he had
just gone on "the best date ever" with a girl he once called a tick.
Funny, she didn't seem so tickish now.
feel anything" bit at the end of last week's show. So here's my take
on a more J/H 'shiper friendly ending. This is my
first J/H fanfic.
Disclaimer: Don't own them, never will, I'll cry a river, build a
bridge and get over it I supose.
Title: On Second Thought
Pairing: Duh Jackie and Hyde
Scene: Picks up where last week's episode left off. Hyde and Jackie
are returning from their first date. 'Nuff said.
Steven Hyde gently helped Jackie into the car and shut the door. He
stalked over to the driver side and slid in. They drove in silence
each lost in their own thoughts.
How could she not have felt it?! It was short but it had been one of
the best kisses of his life. He cared for her more than anybody else
he knew, and as much as the thought scared him, it also thrilled
him. And she hadn't felt it! Damnit, now what was he supposed to
do?
Jackie replayed the kiss over and over in her own mind. It was
sweet, and passionate at the same time. It was her Steven finally
kissing her, so why wasn't she more excited? Perhaps they simply
hadn't given it enough time to build into what she had expected.
After all she had been obsessing about him all summer long, so maybe
they simply needed to try again.
Jackie was drawn out of her thoughts when she realized that Hyde was
driving towards the water tower. "Steven where are we going?" she
curiously aske.
"I'll tell you when we get there," he replied with a smirk on his
face.
"Whatever," she said shrugging her shoulders.
They reached the water tower and he parked the car then walked around
to the other side to open her door. "Come on," he encouraged her
gently reaching down and taking her hand in his own. They walked to
the latter hands entwined in a comfortable silence. With a
mischevious glint in his eyes he turned her around and placed her on
the second rung of the latter urging her to climb up.
"No Steven, I don't like heights!" she exclaimed.
"Don't worry I'll be right behind you, ya won't fall," he stated as
he casually stepped into position behind her. Feeling reasured she
began to climb and relished in Steven's close proximity. She sudenly
stopped about halfway up causing him to brush up right behind her,
and she knew he had been lying when he said he hadn't felt anything.
Turning her head around she arched an eyebrow and coyly stated " Is
that the 'nothing' you felt Steven?" His jaw dropped open, and
pleased by his reaction she scurried up the latter.
He silently collected his composure before joining her on the top of
the water tower. He silently vowed to show her exactly what he had
felt, but had been too stuborn to admit the first time around.
Aproaching her he grabbed her around the waist and pulled her flush
against his chest. He dipped his head and ravished her neck with
his toungue, teeth and lips. He heard her draw in a shaky breath and
smiled to himself at the effect he had on her. Dragging his mouth up
to her ear he whispered "Now can you say that you don't feel
anything?"
Jackie turned the tables on him by arching her neck back and gently
suckeling on his neck just above his tee shirt. "Only if you don't"
she murmered against his skin. Unable to stand it anymore he
skilfully rolled her over so she was stradeling his lap and facing
him. His face grew serious as he asked, " Jackie, I told you, but
you never told me, what did you think of our first date?" She smiled
and descended on his mouth, prying his lips open and snaking her
toungue into his mouth in one fluid moment. Her actions drew a low
moan from him and satisfied she pulled away. "Does that answer your
question?" she asked him. In response he simply growled and ground
their mouths together again. Toungues danced together as they very,
very, VERY thourougly explored each others mouths. Their kiss was
passionate and tender, anaimalistic and reverent. Only the basic
need for oxygen broke the contact and they broke away heavily
panting.
Still recovering from their passionate embrace Jackie leaned her head
against his chest and sighend with contentment. He wrapped his arms
around her and happily played with her hair, surprised by the fact
that he could be so happy doing something he considered to be so
girly. They clung to each other for a long time until Steven spoke.
"Jackie?"
"Hmmm?" she asked lifting her head off of him.
"My ass fell asleep." She chuckled and got off of him. He got to
his feet, and they climbed back down to the earth and walked joyously
back to the car.
"Steven?"
"Yes dear?"
"On our next date, let's go somewhere where we can move around more,
ok?"
He shot her a sideways glance and grined as he replied "You know, I'm
still not opposed to doing it." She playfully slapped him and got
into the car. Steven walked around and couldn't keep a smile off of
his face as he thought about the fact that he had just gone a first
date with a girl he once called a tick. On second thought, he had
just gone on "the best date ever" with a girl he once called a tick.
Funny, she didn't seem so tickish now.