Here you are! My first non-twilight story! WOW! Hope you think that my idea is unique! I am NOT L.J. Smith...I am just borrowing her characters but this plot is mine, I thought of it when I was on vacation with my cousins.

APOV-Ash (it's a guy, not a girl)--------------------------------------

I had spent a lot of time trying to prove that I was a good person and I thought I was good so far. So, I decided to visit Mary-Lynette. I missed her so much, a year ago I had laughed at my cousin James when he said that I would fall in love and it would hurt. Yet here I've been, worried sick about M-L, I couldn't wait to kiss her beautiful lips again. I stopped by my sisters' house first.

"Ash! We weren't expecting you until much later. Mary-Lynette is stargazing, over on top of that hill there." Jade pointed out the hill; wow she sure can read my mind sometimes.

"Okay, I would stay and chat, but I want to surprise her." Jade smiled and pushed me out the door; they had fixed the hole in the porch so luckily I didn't fall down. I ran through the trees so I could sneak up on her.

As I got closer I heard a male voice and started to worry. I hadn't talked to Mary-Lynette in forever did she forget me? When I was even closer I saw them stargazing together. I felt bad spying but I couldn't just walk out and have her be in an awkward position. The guy was charming her, I had used that technique with girls before, and I could tell what he was doing. Then out of nowhere, he leaned down and kissed her!

I ran. I'm not going to watch my soul mate kiss another guy! I spent all this time trying to improve myself for her. Now, she just throws it away like I mean nothing. I shouldn't have trusted a human, or anyone for that matter with my heart. I walked into my sisters' house slammed the front door and ran up to the guest room and slammed the door behind me. My sisters came running to the door worried.

"Ash, what's wrong? What happened?" Kestrel asked. She must have known about this.

"Just go guys!" I yelled. I heard two people walk away, but Jade opened the door. She didn't say anything. I guess she knew about too, why didn't she tell me? I didn't say anything. A few minutes passed and Jade finally said something.

"We didn't have a choice, Ash. I'm sorry, we figured that you would be okay with it." Oh yeah, I have no problem with some guy kissing my soul mate! * Note: sarcasm*

"You thought I'd be okay with it? Yeah, I want to go see that a million more times, I love the feeling of having my heart ripped out!" It kept replaying in my mind and each time it did a new wave of pain hit me.

"Why are you taking this so badly?" Jade asked confused. I shouldn't have changed, now I'm vulnerable and I feel like crying I can feel the tears in my eyes.

"Ash, are really mad over her transformation? She's just a vampire, relax!" Chill and relax, what would she do if it were her soul mate?

"What are you talking about, Jade? I'm confused, she's a vampire?" When did that happen, I thought she didn't want that.

"Yes, she was in a car accident. Isn't that why you are all worked up?"

"No, I didn't even notice that. I am just mad that I spent so long improving myself and then she's here…" …Kissing other guys, not caring about me.

"Here what?" Stop it Jade! Stop acting dumb!

"Here not caring about me, all I think about is her and she's here with some other guy!"

"Okay, now I'm confused, she won't stop asking about you. Why would she…?" She was probably asking about me so she wouldn't get caught.

"Don't ask me! I don't understand this at all." There was a knock at the door. "Jade if it's her, I don't want to talk to her, just don't mention me at all. I'm going to hunt." I jumped out the window before she could argue with me.

MLPOV-Mary-Lynette------------------------------------------

I went stargazing with Max. He was the new guy at school, and was very quiet. He talks to me but he's only a friend. Oddly, he shares my interest of outer space. He kept talking, it sounded like he was trying to charm me, and even though I have told him countless times that my heart is already claimed by another person. I miss Ash so much, I cry every night. I know he wants to prove himself to be good but I just want to kiss his lips again. I long for that pick haze. Out of nowhere, Max leaned over and pressed his lips to mine I pushed him away.

"Max, I don't think we should hang out anymore." I stated clearly.

"I'm sorry Mary-Lynette, it just happened." He said.

"Things just don't happen Max, I already told you, there is nothing between us! Just go home!" I put away my binoculars and telescope then drove to my house. I got there in 5 minutes then ran all the way to the sisters' house. I knocked on the door and a moment later Kestrel answered it. She was about to say something but Jade covered her mouth. That wasn't normal.

"Hey M-L, what brings you here?" Kestrel asked after taking Jade's hand off her mouth.

"Um, I was hanging out with Max and out of nowhere he kissed me! I needed to talk to someone. I miss Ash so much, do you know when he is coming back?" I asked hopeful. Jade answered my question immediately.

"He hasn't talked to us in a while." Jade answered immediately. Her sisters looked at her confused but quickly agreed. They're acting rather suspiciously.

"Okay." I can' believe he hasn't contacted them yet; it's been a couple months since he left. It got real silent. "Maybe I'll go hunting now."

"No, you shouldn't go hunting so often, it gives you more bloodlust." Jade said worried. They never told me that, but they're probably right I already had some blood this morning, enough to last until tomorrow morning.

Okay, I hoped that you liked it! I am not sure how to continue it really, maybe give more insight into their relationship. Okay so review so that I can continue. Please, help me out with this story, just a tiny bit of help please and thank-you.

~vamplover17~