I have done the first three chapters, and more will follow! I have added elements of Sirius Black and stuff too! Though the plot may take a slightly different course, it will all work out in the end! still checking for errors though! hope you like it!
~OhHolyCow
P.S.: The chapters will be shorter, but there will eventually be lots to read!
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The Vision on the Train
Harry Potter and His friends Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger were about to start their third year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry as they boarded the train that would take them there. The area was tainted with the smell of fear and insecurity, which Harry knew was caused by the escape of the mass-murderer, Sirius Black, who has escaped from Azkaban. Once Harry and his friends boarded the train, they gathered into a car where a mysterious man was already slumbering. Harry and his friends began to feel anticipation for their current year at Hogwarts. They spent much of the train ride gabbing about how exciting the year would be for them, as well as the whereabouts of Sirius Black.
To their discontent, the train stopped prematurely; they knew that something didn't feel right. All of the students began to look out the window, puzzled about the current situation. The train rocked, causing all of the windows to slam shut. "Bloody Hell!" Ron cried. "What was that?" He continued as ice began to form on the windows of the train. The flickering lights on the train finally shut off in their entirety. "There's something outside!" Ron yelled, panicked. "I'm sure that it's nothing, Ron" Hermione said, also unsure about what lurked outside of the train.
A dark creature approached the window of their car as it began to open. It was cloaked in a torn, black fabric, making it seem even more eerie. The dark creature entered the train as it began to look around the car. It glared at Harry as it began to take his life-force. Harry heard a woman scream as he passed out onto the floor. He was inside of a dark void that existed within his mind when he saw someone. He was a short boy, who had golden hair and eyes. He wore a cloak that bore the Cross of Flamel. The boy then clapped his hands as Harry awoke.