Hello readers! I'm so excited to be writing this story I have just watched the movie the Secret of Moonacre and I am determined to read the book! So here's my first chapter please read, review, and enjoy!
your faithful writer,
Balance303
Chapter 1
Can't breathe
"I'm telling you Loveday it's too small I can barely breathe!" Maria gasped. She was tugging at her corsette which was much to small for her breasts and she felt cased in.
"But this is the new one Mrs. Heliotrope and I just bought for you!" Loveday said in suprise, Maria kept growing and growing into a woman and it was shocking! Everyone they knew saw this including Maria's uncle Benjamin who didn't like all the attention Maria was constantly getting from not only boys but grown men!
"I'm sorry but it's much to small I'm practically falling right out of it!" Maria's statement was true her breast's bulged from the corsette which to any man was wonderful but for her it was pure torcher!
"I'm sorry my darling but this is the biggest one you have you're going to have to live it just for one day I promise." With that said Loveday kissed her cheeks gave her a reasuring hand on the shoulder and left Maria's room.
"Well Maria I suppose you might as well just go riding eating will only make this thing tighter!" With that she left for the stable to get Periwinkle.
After she had got on Periwinkle and started out to ride Maria started to feel a little faint and breathing became even harder. She slowed Periwinkle to a slow walk. Though she was riding at the edge of the forest she didn't hear her name being called.
"Maria! Maria? Hello? PRINCESS!" Robin came running through the trees and stopped Periwinkle and gasped! Robin only had to take one look at Maria for her to take his breath away and though he knew it wasn't the right thing to do he couldn't help but gaze at how her young girl shape had become a full womanly figure. Looking at all of her with her hair loose and wild made her look undescribable to the point where he couldn't even speak until he focused on her face. It was paled and her breath was coming in short gasps. "Oh my goodness Maria!" He lifted her off of her horse and lowered her down to the grass.
"Robin," she gasped she couldn't make words come out it took too much air so she settled with pointing down.
"Yes Maria I... See." Robin gulped and focused on her face. She knew and hit him with what she could muster.
"No... You... Ninny! My corsett... is... too...tight." She gasped for air.
"Well what do you want me to... NO YOUR UNCLE, LOVEDAY, MRS. HELIOTROPE AND EVERYONE WOULD KILL ME IF I DID!" he yelled.
"Robin hurry I can't..." she fainted.
"Maria, Maria!" he shook her shoulders in a sad attempt to wake her up but had no such luck. Silently praying that he wouldn't die later that day he started to remove her dress and was stunned for only a moment by her and remembered the task at hand and started to loosen her corsett but that wasn't enough he could tell that it was still to tight so he had to rip it and after a moment he heard her gasp.
"Oh thank god air!" Maria yelled as she put her hand on her chest and tried to gill her lungs with air." It took her a moment to collect herself and then she realized the state she was in and her attire and pulled her dress that had rippedto her. She looked at Robin with anger and then remembered that she had asked him to do it and that he did it not because he wanted to but because he needed to. With this thought her face softened and she said, "Thank you Robin I wish I knew how to repay you." she said as she hugged him.
Robin blushed and turned his head and smiled and said, "Anything for you princess."
"Robin?.. Umm I know that this might be asking a lot but I can't go back home like this, you wouldn't happen to have something at the castle would you?" she asked feeling horrible for asking.
But he just chuckled and said, "Of course, but you can't go through the woods like that hurry get on Periwinkle." Luckily Periwinkle had grown in those few years so Robin was able to mount him as well. He set Periwinkle to a light walk because as soon as he too got on Maria without thinking leaned against him and he didn't want to get to the castle faster than necessary.
When they got to the castle Robin had to sneak them in not wanting to risk Maria being seen by anyone especially the men that threw themselves at her. Just thinking about them made him angry.
"We're almost to the room I.. We have prepaired for you." Maria caught the mistake and smiled to herself she wasn't an imbecile she knew that men had started to lust after her and Robin wasn't an exception but the difference was that he treated her with respect and caught himself when he stared. It was different with Robin.
"Thank you Robin." Just as she said this they walked into her room and she was astounded at how beautiful it was!
While Robin walked over to a large wardrobe and leafed through the dresses he found one that he himself had bought for her but had kept it hush hush because he knew that his friends would tease him about it and Loveday would bug him about it. While he took out the dress Maria looked through drawers looking for undergarments and finally found it and when she found one that looked like it would fit she took it out not even thinking about how it looked and forgetting that Robin was in the room. When she took it out of the drawer and held it up to get a better look at it Robin dropped the dress and took a sharp intake of breath. The corsett was for a lack of better words sexy it was black lace and red velvet and black and red laces in the back. Maria took one look at it, smiled and nodded and walked behind a screen to get into it. Just as Robin had composed himself Maria called him.
"Robin... Um" she didn't know what to do she thought that she could have laced it herself but she couldn't reach. She knew that there was no one else besides Robin. "I... I need your help." She felt embarassed and summoning up her courage she walked out from behind the screen and Robin upon looking at her dropped the dress again. "I need you to get the laces." Maria looked down and felt her face getting warm.
"Uh..uh yeah yeah sure." Robin stumbled over and Maria turned around. Robin then focused on the laces and after getting distracted a few times finally finished. and Maria turned around and he couldn't help his eyes but he only got a glimpse because Maria hugged him tight. She was thankful and he hugged her back and when she pulled away they looked at eachother for only a moment and kissed with a longing and passion that had been repressed for a while all sexual tension gone. Their bodies were on fire everywhere they touched and they felt perfect bliss.
Okay for my first chapter I think that it's pretty darn good I'm hoping to update soon so I hope you enjoyed and please review I would love to hear your comments!
Your faithful writer,
Balance303
