Hey, I'm new to fanfiction so I'm still trying to understand more least how to work this. I'm working on a story and I want to get some feedbacks. This story is a beyblade story with my favorite characters. This story is mostly about Kai and my character Shadow and other characters from the series along with my other OC, Rika. I don't own beyblade, yu yu hakisho and bleach but I do own Shadow and Rika. Leave some comments if you like and I hope you enjoy my story. Btw I will put in the first chapter if there are a lot of reviews.
Preface
10 Years Ago
July, 2011
The night was young as a couple heads over to a hotel room. They knew each other for a long time. Even though they were both beyblades, they were still friends, rivals and most of all lovers. They were only a year apart but they didn't care what others had said about them. The media tries to get them to talk about their relationship but they will always deny it. They would rather keep their relationship their secret and their secret only.
They closed the door as they chuckle and giggle. They had a wonderful time at dinner and now to rest things off with a little spice. Kai Hiwatari was strong, muscular, tall and slim. His blue face paint trade marks symbolized his warrior side as a blader. When his around the team, he keeps to himself and stays quiet throughout everything unleast the team needs his wisdom. But the only one he shows affection for without the team noticing will be the woman that soon will be in his arms.
The woman in his arms was nothing but a street fighter and a badass chick. Shadow Urameshi was known to be the toughest girl within her high school and was a badass of a blader too. She has the same attitude as Kai when she's around the team but she can show her positive and loving side only to Kai. She would smile, laugh, and actually physically get close to him. She would always and secretively go to him when she needs advice or just wants to be with a friend that understands her. Every time they are together, they always enjoy each other's company and didn't mind if they didn't talk.
Shadow's green orbs met with Kai's violet eyes. She smiled at him as she wrapped her arms around his neck. He held her close to his body by securing his arms around her waist. Slowly her smile faded as she looked away and placed her head on his chest. He felt concern now and wants to know what's wrong. He unwrapped one of his arms and placed it underneath her chin. He softly pulled her chin up so he can look at her in the eyes.
"Shadow…what's wrong?" he asked as his two tone blue hair slid down and covered his eyes.
She let out a sigh through her nose as she looks at him. She slowly placed her hands on his hair that covered his eyes and moved it away. She never took her eyes off his. She slid her hand down to his cheek as he placed his hand on hers. He took her hand and lightly kissed her knuckles.
"Shadow…please…tell me what's wrong?" he asked again.
Shadow softly smiled when she saw him kiss her knuckles. But soon it faded when the question bopped up again. She bit her lower lip. For the past few days she has been thinking about her future plans but wasn't sure how to tell Kai. She let out another sigh and looked at him in the eyes.
"Kai…we both know I'm about to graduate…I love beyblading but I want to do more then just beyblading. I…I want to build up a career for myself…and by doing that I…I'm planning on go to college out of the country" she said softly.
She looked away afraid how he was slowly taken it. She heard him let out a sigh. She glanced at him and saw he was a bit disappointed but held her close to him. He kissed the top of her head and laid his cheek on her head. She held onto him tighter afraid to let go.
"I…I understand and I'll support you all the way…do you…have any acceptance letters?" he asked softly.
She nods her head slowly. She was afraid to use her voice considering she feels she's going to lose the one person that knows her for her. Besides her being a beyblader, her and her brother, Yusuke Urameshi, are spirit detectives. Even besides her being a spirit detective and a beyblader, she was also a soul reaper. The only few people know about her doings are her closest friends such as Ichigo, Rukia,Orihime,Chad, Lucy, Kon and Uryu.
Kai made her face him again but this time with his eyes closed and pressed his lips against hers. She was surprised by his new action but kissed back as she tightens her arms around his neck. He slid his hand down her waist to the bottom of her buttocks and picked her up from there as she wrapped her legs around his slim waist. She tighten her legs around his waist as she opened her lips a bit allowing him entrance as he slid his tongue into her warm mouth. He explores her mouth ever so lovingly.
He slowly walked to the bed as they made out. She moans lightly in his mouth as he let out a groan. He placed her down on the bed as he got on top of her. He never took his lips off of hers as he took off his1/3 short jacket. He pulled away as he and Shadow breathed heavy. She looks at him with love in her eyes.
"Let's let this night be our special night" he said softly.
Shadow's eyes widen as she nod softly. She placed a hand on his cheek as she looked at him in the eyes. Her green emerald eyes met with his purple violet eyes. She sat up a bit and took off his shirt. He closed his eyes as he lifts his arms above his head. She threw his shirt across the room.
"Okay" she said softly
Kai lightly smiled and kissed her. She kissed back as she felt his hands on her waist and slowly lifted up her shirt. She lifted her arms up as he took her shirt off completely. He threw it behind him and looked at her. She blushed lightly as she was wearing a hot pink silk bra. He smiled as he placed a hand on her cheek.
"You don't have to blush or be nervous" he said softly.
She blushed a bit more as she looked at him and placed her hand on his. She looked more into his eyes. She let out small easy breaths as she looked at him. He smiled at her as he lean his forehead on hers. She smiled back at him. He kissed her on the lips with more passion.
She let out another moan as she allowed him entrance to her mouth. He slowly started to take off her jet black jeans that were tightly around her thighs and legs. He kissed down her body as he pulled and tugged to get her jeans off. He got off the bed to take off her shoes and socks. He finally took off her jeans and threw them on the floor leaving her in her matching hot pink panties.
He took off his shoes and socks. He then slowly took off his dark blue sweats as he showed off his black boxers with little red phoenixes on it. She looked at him as if she was in a daze full of lust. He got back on top of her as he looked into her green emerald orbs. She looked into his violet purple orbs as she placed her hand on the back of his head and pulled him down to her lips.
He kissed her back as he snaked his arms around her waist. He got closer to her as he let out a groan. He slightly opened his eyes to see her biting on to his lower lip and pulling it back to hers. He smirked and placed his lips back on hers. He held her close to him and pulled her on top of him as he rolled onto his back.
Shadow was on top of him as they kissed passionately and lovingly. She slid her hands up and down his bare chest causing him to let out a small groan. She pulled away and looked at him. He looked back at her with a small smile as he slowly relaxed underneath her touch. He placed his hand on her cheek as he gently strokes her cheekbone with his thumb.
She smiled back down at him as she placed her hand on his. She took his hand in hers and gently kissed the back of his knuckles. He watched her movement and smiled more to himself and at her. He gently placed her back on her back and looked down at her. She bit her lower lip as she looks at him.
He smiled and kissed her swollen pink lips. She sat up abit as she wrapped her arms around his neck. He laid his body closer to hers as he snaked his hands up her back and laid them on her bra strap. As they were kissing, he slowly unhooked her bra and threw it behind him to the floor. Her breast pressed against his chest.
He laid her back down as he looked down at her. He kissed down her body to the valley of her breast. He kissed and licked one of her nipple as he massaged the other. Once her nipple was pink and hard, he did the same treatment to the other. As Kai was doing all this, Shadow moaned and groaned his name.
He smiled at her as he placed his hands on her hips holding onto the fabric that was covering the place where it should be pleasured the most. He looked at her as she blush seventy shades of red. She felt her hands holding the fabric invading his erection. He kissed her softly as she kissed back. They slowly took off their last clothing.
She blushed once she saw how huge he was once it was freed from its prison. Kai smirked but held his comment to himself as he slid a finger in her. She let out a moan mixed with a groan. Pleasure ran through her nervous system to the core of her stomach. He slid in another finger as he felt how warm she was, he let out a groan from hearing her moan his name causing his erection abit of pain.
He took out his fingers and looked at her. She groaned out of the lost of his fingers in her which caused her to look at him. The slight sweat made it seem he was glowing lightly within the dark room. He kissed her passionately then softly pulled away which made Shadow moan out of disappointment. He smirks lightly at her as he placed a hand on her cheek and softly strokes her cheek with his thumb.
"You ready, Shadow?" he asked softly.
Shadow looked into his orbs as her thoughts ran to try and think if she was making the right choice. She then remembered she just got off her period just the other day. She bit her lip then kissed him lightly. He kissed back just as lightly but then pulled away still waiting for his answer. She gave him a small smile.
"Yes, I'm ready and…I have no regrets, Kai" she said softly as she placed her hand on his cheek and softly stroke his cheek with her thumb.
Kai smiled at her and nod. He placed his hands on both sides of her head as he looked down at her. She wrapped her arms around his neck as she lightly stork the back of his neck. He felt abit nervous as he looked down between their bodies then looked at her. She looked at him abit confused and nervous as well.
"You know its going to hurt, right?" he asked.
"I know Kai…but it will subside" she answered.
He nods as he slowly pushed inside her entrance. Her eyes widen as she felt the pain run through her nervous system. She held in the cry of pain as she shut her eyes and tighten her jaw close. Kai kept seeing her reaction as he continues to push inside her and gave her a kiss as he forced his tongue in her mouth. They continue to kiss till she felt his full erection inside her. He pulled away from the kiss and looked at her.
"You ok?" he asked concern.
"No…it hurts so much" she said as her tears slid down her cheeks.
"You want me to stop?" he asked as he wiped away her tears.
"No…don't stop Kai….please…don't"
"I'll go slowly….just tell me when you want me to go faster" he said and kissed her.
He started to move his hips slowly as he went in and out of her. She groaned in pain as she felt some pain as he moved inside of her. He never took his eyes off of her face. He wanted to make sure she wasn't in any pain, once he saw she wasn't, he started to move faster. She felt him go abit faster which caused pleasure mixed with pain but caused her to moan.
He felt his heart race as he started to move faster inside of her as he grabbed a hold of the sheets. She started to move with him, meeting with his every thrust. They called each others names loudly not caring if any one heard them. Kai held onto the sheets as he moved faster and harder within her causing great pleasure for both of them. Shadow took a hand off his neck and placed it in his hand and laced her fingers with his as he did the same.
She wrapped her legs around his waist causing him to go deeper within her. He hit a certain spot within her causing her to moan with great pleasure. He continues to hit that spot as he felt her walls tighten more and more around him. She moaned out his name as she felt him hitting her pleasure spot. She held on to his hand and tightens her grip on his waist.
He continues to hit her pleasure spot faster and harder. She felt the pit of her stomach growing with more pleasure. She didn't want it to end just yet but she knew sooner or later it will have to; he stopped a quick second to roll them over so he was on his back and she was on top. She looked down at him as she felt him move his hips up against her as he pulled her down to him. They both moaned and groaned each others name.
She rode him in the same pace he was in. She never let go of his hand as he held her hip with his free strong hand. She threw her head back with pleasure feeling as he too threw his head back calling her name. They were both coming up to their breaking point. She felt her warm liquid went down his shaft like a waterfall as his seeds poured into her in tremendous speed.
"KAI" she moaned out in great pleasure.
"SHADOW" he moaned out as well with his own great pleasure.
She fell on top of him as she shook from the orgasm effect. He held her close to him as he slowly came out of her. He let out a groan as he felt the coldness of the air instead of her warm entrance. She let out a whimper of lost of him not inside of her. They were breathing hard as they stood in each others arms.
"I love you, Kai" she said before she went into a deep sleep.
"I love you too, Shadow….I will always love you" he said but knew she didn't hear him.
Early in the morning Kai was looking for Shadow's sleeping form. But only felt the silky fabric, he woke up quickly only to find out he was by himself. His eyes widen and looked from side to side; he spotted a white little envelope. He grabbed the envelope and opened the letter. He couldn't believe what he was reading.
Dear my beloved Kai,
By the time you read this letter, I will be gone. I'm so sorry for doing this to you in such short notice. I will never forget you or what we've done. But even though I love beyblading, I want a better future for myself. Please support my choice and eventually I will come back to be with you. Sadly the college I'll be enrolling to will be far away and I will focus mostly on my school work so I probably won't be able to contact you or anyone else. But Kai please don't forget I love you and I am sooo sorry for doing this to you.
Always going to be your girl,
Krystal "Shadow" Urameshi
Kai looked down hurt and confused as he drops the letter by the bed side, he lay back down on the bed. He turned his head where her sleeping form should've been. In his whole life the first time he cried was when he was seven and his father walked out on him for beyblades, this would be the second time he had cried throughout his life. He covered his face as his tears started to come down his cheeks. He held in his cries of pain as he covered his face with the pillow and sheets.
