Um this is my first story so go ahead and tell me if it sucks cuz it probley does. So yeah, tell me what you think. And I know that it's supper short, don't worry the chapters will get longer later in the story I promise!
I quickly walked away from the mess I had just created while battling that last monster. When I finally stopped to see just where I was I noticed a strange little girl in the ally with me. She had honey colored hair and strange eyes, and that's when I knew that she wasn't normal because her eyes seemed to some how change colors.
"Who are you?" she asked, then she looked down at the sword in my hands and her eyes got wide, "Your a monster killer too?"
"Um...yeah I guess so...my name's Thalia, don't you have any parents?" I asked even though I kind of all ready knew the answer, I still had hope for her. Then I looked down the alley, "Or a home?"
"No they ran from the monsters, and left me here, I tried to fight the monsters so they would leave me alone, and I could be with my family again, but the knife I had just went strait through them. But I did find a house that had no one in it that I can stay in." She didn't say it like she was sad or sorry that her parents hand left her, more like it was just a pointless fact, she said it without any real meaning.
I thought for a minute then decided what I would do since it was obvious that the girl was a halfblood. "Here take this," I said and handed hear my sword, "this will hurt the monsters."
"But what about you, what if a monster comes after you now?" she asked.
"That's ok, I'm better with a bow and arrow anyways." I smiled.
"Ok." Said the girl.
"Here...justa sec..." After I wrote it I handed her the letter, "Don't open it until... your.....oh I don't know your 12 or 13.....It will be safer for you to know then." And I handed her a letter that explained what she really was, a halfblood (and how to get to camp). I know I probably shouldn't have wrote the letter incase a mortal found it, but I didn't care.
"I have to go now ok, I don't want to attract any more monsters to you ok, good bye." And that was the last thing I said as I left her in that alley.
And that was the last time I saw her. I've always wondered what happened to her, if she made it to camp, who claimed her if she did....I would have just had her join the hunters if Artemis hadn't been away on Olympus so she could take the oaf, I never even found out her name. I really probably shouldn't have just left her there, infact I felt really bad nowing that I should have just taken her with me....but somehow I knew that she somehow belonged on here own, that she would make it to camp, I don't know why I just knew it, she was tough, she would survive, I could tell.
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