Okay I have re-write chapter 1 to 10. I hope you like the things I have
changed and all. Please let a review and tell if it got better to read.
I dont own digimon
Flamon is back to the real world
Chapter 1: Flamon is back
It was a half-year since Malomyotismon was destroyd and is was just one week since Takuya and the others come through the portal to the real world and something happend to Takuya.
(Normal pov) Kouji come inn to Izumi`s room were Izumi and the unconcious Takuya. "Hey how is he doing have he awake yet" Kouji asked. "No, but Kouji were shall we have Takuya in the meanwhile he is this you remember what Ophanimon he will get normal after we have destroyd the evil." Asked Izumi. Kouji leaned against the wall "he could be here to he get to normal if its fine for you and I dont have forgot what Ophanimon said" he said. "Its fine by me but what if he dont want to be here." She answer. (Kouji smile)" you dont have to be afraid of that I know him that good." He said. "Okay if you say so but what about his mom and dad they have call the police already" She answers. " Yes but people cant se him like this and what should we say to you`re parents." Said Kouji in a serious tone. "He could be my pet" Said Izumi and smiled. "O.. kay hey he begin to wake." Said Kouji and looked at Izumi strangely Then they saw Takuya begin to wake up. "Hey were am I. The last thing I remember is that Agunimon throw me to the portal to the human world." Takuya said as he woke up "Hey Takuya how you feeling" asked Izumi. "I just got a bad headache." Answer Takuya "That's good but you must stay here to we have destroyd the new evil." Said Kouji "Is there a new evil and why must I stay here to we have destroyd the new evil" asked Takuya and was confused Then Izumi`s parents come inn Izumi`s room "IZUMI WHAT IS THAT" shouted Izumi`s "Its a dog and I Kouji got it to me can I have him please mom please dad" She said Izumi`s parents just stood and glaring at Takuya. "Can I" She asked again "Well if you promise me to take good care off it and he doesn't do something bad to the house okay" said Izumi's dad "Yes dad and tank you so much" she said with joy Gave her mom and dad a big hug. Takuya was very confuse. Izumi`s parents have walk dovn to the kitchen. "Can you tell me what is going on" Takuya asked and was really confused. "Well when we come through the portal you was change to a digimon and because of that you must stay here. Ophanimon say that when we have destroy the new evil you will get to be normal again." Kouji answer "What hey I am that digimon again" Said Takuya and looked as his body.
TBC
I dont own digimon
Flamon is back to the real world
Chapter 1: Flamon is back
It was a half-year since Malomyotismon was destroyd and is was just one week since Takuya and the others come through the portal to the real world and something happend to Takuya.
(Normal pov) Kouji come inn to Izumi`s room were Izumi and the unconcious Takuya. "Hey how is he doing have he awake yet" Kouji asked. "No, but Kouji were shall we have Takuya in the meanwhile he is this you remember what Ophanimon he will get normal after we have destroyd the evil." Asked Izumi. Kouji leaned against the wall "he could be here to he get to normal if its fine for you and I dont have forgot what Ophanimon said" he said. "Its fine by me but what if he dont want to be here." She answer. (Kouji smile)" you dont have to be afraid of that I know him that good." He said. "Okay if you say so but what about his mom and dad they have call the police already" She answers. " Yes but people cant se him like this and what should we say to you`re parents." Said Kouji in a serious tone. "He could be my pet" Said Izumi and smiled. "O.. kay hey he begin to wake." Said Kouji and looked at Izumi strangely Then they saw Takuya begin to wake up. "Hey were am I. The last thing I remember is that Agunimon throw me to the portal to the human world." Takuya said as he woke up "Hey Takuya how you feeling" asked Izumi. "I just got a bad headache." Answer Takuya "That's good but you must stay here to we have destroyd the new evil." Said Kouji "Is there a new evil and why must I stay here to we have destroyd the new evil" asked Takuya and was confused Then Izumi`s parents come inn Izumi`s room "IZUMI WHAT IS THAT" shouted Izumi`s "Its a dog and I Kouji got it to me can I have him please mom please dad" She said Izumi`s parents just stood and glaring at Takuya. "Can I" She asked again "Well if you promise me to take good care off it and he doesn't do something bad to the house okay" said Izumi's dad "Yes dad and tank you so much" she said with joy Gave her mom and dad a big hug. Takuya was very confuse. Izumi`s parents have walk dovn to the kitchen. "Can you tell me what is going on" Takuya asked and was really confused. "Well when we come through the portal you was change to a digimon and because of that you must stay here. Ophanimon say that when we have destroy the new evil you will get to be normal again." Kouji answer "What hey I am that digimon again" Said Takuya and looked as his body.
TBC