Yo. As you all know I'm new to this whole fanfiction thing. So if you guys would take it easy on me and tell me some of the things I do wrong that would be great. Okay now to the story, if any of you have read my page you'd know I have two characters and there bio's. In this story I'll be using Keazako Hoshigaki, but he just likes to be called Kea. Now with no other interruptions, let's start my first fanfic! (Also, I give half of the credit for my character creation to a very special friend. Some of you may know her as pony-chan, but her name is AtemxYugi Kfxjinx. Now that's all! Start the fanfic!)
Today in konoha was just perfect. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, and a certain raven haired girl was on her way to train. She was very shy and usually avoided people other than her teammates, so today she decided to train by herself. It seemed to be a perfect day for the teenage girl. Yet she didn't know what was about to happen to her would change her forever.
"Hmm…I wonder what I should train on first." Hinata thought to herself. Today she was training so that she could show her childhood crush, Naruto Uzumaki, how strong she had gotten. She was planning on sparring with him later that day.
When Hinata got to the training field, she started to practice on her gentle-step techniques. Gracefully she spun around; striking what seemed to be nothing but air. Yet as she continued to spin, there was a disturbance in the area.
"What? What's happening?" Hinata asked to no one. Even though she was strong, she was still timid.
Moments later, the river area of the training field erupted, shooting water high into the sky past Hinata's head. "What?!" was all the girl could get out before she was carried away by a wave of the eruption. When the water died down, Hinata looked back to the river area to see something that shocked her more than anything. In the water was a boy, unconscious, blood all over his body, and what seemed to be multiple blades coming out of his body.
Without giving a second thought on who the boy actually was, Hinata ran over to him to see if he was okay. "H…Hey! Are you alright?" Hinata said, but the boy remained unconscious. Fearing that he could be dead, Hinata pulled the boy out of the water and onto dry land. She didn't know any medical ninjutsu, so she instead went to make some herbs that could help.
When she returned, the boy was still out cold. Hinata then started to apply the herbs she had onto the boy's wounds, but soon realized a serious problem. The blades were still inside of him. There were three in total, one in his right leg, one on his left arm, and the one that scared Hinata the most was the one in his chest. She couldn't see, but she could tell it was dangerously close to his heart.
"I…I have to do something…" Hinata told herself. And with that said, she proceeded to pull out the blades imbedded inside the boy. When she got all three of them out, she started to once again apply her herbs to his wounds. 'This will help, but I can't do it alone.' Hinata thought to herself. So with that thought in her head, she put the boy's arm around her neck and carried him back to konoha.
Throughout the large city, people stared at Hinata and the boy she was carrying as if they had never seen her before. As she received more and more looks, she started to question what she was really doing. 'Why am I doing this?' she thought. 'I don't know this person…and…I have no idea where he's from.'
Soon, Hinata reached the hospital where she immediately had the still unconscious boy taken in for treatment. When he was off of her hands, she had a feeling of relief throughout head. As she walked off, she took one last look at the dark-skinned boy she had brought here. For some reason, she then turned to the doctor before asking. "Um…is…is it okay if I stay?" she didn't know why, but she just felt like she didn't want to leave the boy's side at that moment.
After getting a yes from the doctor, she stayed in the waiting room near the boy's room. She was told that she would be able to see him after a few hours, but she didn't mind. For some reason she just wanted to stay with him. "…I wonder if I'm just going crazy." Hinata thought just before falling asleep in the hallway. For the rest of that day, she stayed there, worried for the boy she met. She just really wanted to know why she didn't want to leave, but couldn't find the answer.
Whew! First chapter done. I know that is incredibly short but gimme a break eh? It's my first time. Besides I promise that the next chapter will be longer. In the next chapter, will Hinata find out why she saved the mysterious boy? Wait until next time to find out. Kiba out!