here's a new story. hope you like it. sorry if it stinks
"Aw, here it is," a 14-year-old boy with black hair styled like a samurai said as he walked up to a building. He pulled out a card from his duel disk. "Let's go, partner."
He walked inside, and there were many duels going on. The boy noticed two thugs walk to him, smiling like they found their next victim.
"Aren't you a little young to be coming 'round here, kid?" the bulky black-haired thug asked.
The boy said nothing to the man.
"Aw, what happened?" a skinny man with nose piercings and a faux hawk asked. "You lose your mommy?"
The boy raised his head, revealing heterochromatic eyes, the left red and the right blue.
"No, I didn't, though you bastards will wanna call for yours if you get in my way," he said.
"Ooh, I'm so scared. Whatcha gonna do?"
The skinny man shoved the boy, but he was not amused.
"I warned you. Now pay the price."
He reached into his jacket, and pulled out a badge that looked like a duel disk with a blade crossed over it.
"I am Kai Yoso, a member of the Sabers of the World Organized to Revolutionize Dueling, or SWORD for short. I came here because I heard a rumor about an ex-member being here."
"Maybe there is. Beat us in a Blade duel, and we might tell you."
"Fine. Let's take this outside."
The walked out, and each pulled out strange dueling devices. The thugs' had spikes all over them while Kai's was red with a dragon's head where the deck goes. They got into position, and were ready to duel.
if anyone has a better idea for a first chapter, my email is montainblaster2 at AOL