I would like to continue my fanfiction Only Human but I hate seeing lots of mistakes in it and I already tried my best to correct it myself but since english is not my first language and I'm not speaking/writing it perfectly, I wanted to know if there was anyone ready to correct it? Someone told me that my sentences were wrong and that they were making the reading difficult.. So if there is anyone here who can help me, I would really appreciate it!

Thanks :-)