The Perfect School

by midnighters623

bI didn't know where to put this so i put it here. This is a story i have been writing based off a book by Lois Lowery. I haven't fully developed the plot but i wanted to hear what you thought of my story.

1. Chapter 1

THE PERFECT SCHOOL

Introduction –

From inside the depths of a dark room stepped forth a man so horrid and repulsive, no words could possibly describe him. His smile, anything but inviting and heart-warming, was aimed towards his mistress, his lady, his matron.

Together, they sat in the dark room, the man awaiting his orders from Lady Grouge, his mistress. For this man would do anything for Lady Grouge. ANYTHING, no matter how dangerous, illegal, life-threatening, or immoral.

Quietly, Lady Grouge leaned forward, finding his ear, and silently whispered something.