A Pretty Cure 5 story :
(The animekitty89): "Hi everyone! This is my first story on Fan-fiction, so I hope you will review it and tell me if i could do it better, as soon as you have read it!
(At the Café)
"Wow, Komachi! This is the best book I've ever read!", Rin said.
The five Pretty Cures sat at the familiar Café nearby the school and ate their bought food while they talked about Komachi's first published novel, how popular it became and how much people talked about it around the school.
"Its so serious but still romantic", Urara commented with both her hands lying at her chest.
"Its well-written, full of drama and you're good at describing the different places", Karen praised.
"I really like the ending", Nozumi said with food in her mouth.
"WHAT?" the four girls exclaimed
. "What? What's the matter?", Nozumi asked confused.
"Have you actually read this book? This book?", Rin asked and held up Komachi's novel in front of Nozumi's face.
"Yes, I have. It's about a boy and a girl who's having a great adventure with their friends, but suddenly they both starts growing feelings for each other. But why is that a problem?", Nozumi asked with a sadly look on her face as her friends didn't thought she had actually read a book.
"It's nothing, Nozumi. I'm really glad that you all like my book and thanks for the comments, I really appreciate that", Komachi thanked with her usual calming smile.
"So, where did you get the idea from anyway?", Urara asked while eating a sandwich.
A cold, freezing feeling slowly filled Komachi from top to bottom. Never had she thought that someone not even a friend that someone would ask her about that. Was this the right time to tell where her inspiration actually came from? Tell them the truth? The freezing feeling didn't disappear although Komachi's cheeks were getting warmer and warmer and as she desperately looked down at her thighs to hide it.
Some girls who sat at the table beside them heard Uraras question and quickly went over to hear Komachis answer.
"Yeah, Komachi we're really curious too. Wont you tell us?", one of the girls asked.
"Um...I...", was all Komachi could say.
More and more girls walked over to the Pretty Cures table as they found it very interesting hearing the secret behind Komachis famous book. Some students from the school newspaper also passed by to get a picture and some gossip.
"I'm standing here in front of the famous student author Komachi Akimoto and it seems like her popularity gets bigger and bigger, after she has just published her first book", the head-student of the schools newspaper, Masuki Mika said in front of a video-recorder and then held it under Komachis chin.
"Well, Komachi, whats it gonna be? Are you gonna tell the whole school where you got the idea from?", she then asked. Komachi was all red in her head, which was caused be all the students curious faces. Everyone came with questions about her and her book and everybody talked at the same time so Komachi didnt had the opportunity to answer any of them.
´Man, I can't even think with all that noise, and what am I going to tell my friends and all the other students? Oh, my head...!`, Komachi thought.
The noise became louder and louder and caused Komachi to make them all shut." Look, it doesnt matter where I got the idea from! Now I know this author-thing was a BIG mistake I made, I'm sorry! Oh, I just cant stand this noise!", she yelled when she grabbed her pink school-bag and ran away in the direction of the woods.
"Komachi, wait!", her best friend, Karen said.
But she knew it was too late for her to say that since Komachi still ran until the branches and leaves of the woods had covered her and made her vanish.
All the students left the Pretty Cure, disappointed not getting anything out of Komachi while they had time.
"Wow, Ive never seen Komachi that mad, she must really have been pissed off", Rin said to break the silence.
"Guys, what if Komachi considers quitting her dream of being an author?", Urara asked worried.
"Stop with those thoughts, its her dream she cant be serious stop writing, she likes it, right Karen?", Rin asked.
Karen didn't reply. She still looked at the same place everyone had seen Komachi disappear.
(At Natsu's House.)
Natsu sat on an dark-red armchair and read the news-paper since Kokoda went out buying and they haven't got any costumers for hours. While Natsu read an article about a new published book he started thinking about Komachi.
` Although Komachi's first novel wasn't good she didn't gave up and now her book popular all over the school`.
And when he continued reading, a Pinky suddenly appeared in front of him and flew above him before flying out of the window. Natsu threw the news-paper and went out of the door only to see the Pinky flying across the way and disappeared in the forest. And without thinking Natsu also ran and followed the Pinky on its way to the woods.
(At the forest.)
Komachi ran and ran although she didn't knew where she was going. It felt like eternity and it always felt like the same woods appeared again and again. ´Oh no, I'm lost!", Komachi said and stopped running since it didn't brought her forward. As she caught her breath she began to think about what happened earlier the same day.
´Great, I totally overreact at school today and I'm completely lost, could this day even get better?´.
"Komachi?", a familiar voice asked. And as Komachi heard the voice she stood completely stiff and blushed as normally. It was Natsu.
´Okay, it could...dammit´.
"Hi, Natsu…", she replied looking at her pink school bag. Natsu approached Komachi who still not looked at him to hide her blush.
"What are you doing out here?", she then asked.
"I saw a Pinky and followed it until I caught it in the Dream Collet, then I ended out in the forest and later I saw you here", he explained. Komachi knew she had to tell Natsu what happened or else he would find out himself when her friends gets home from school.
"Natsu…", she said but stopped not knowing how to explain it. Natsu looked at her as she got his attention. Komachi was speechless and Natsu was waiting for her to continue.
"Komachi, have something happened at the school? Is something wrong? Or rather do you have problems?", he asked worried.
Komachi couldn't get herself to look at him and tell him the truth. And when the uncertainty and the conscience rolled up in her she began to snivel that developed into a lot of crying. And when Nastu first saw that he then got more surprised when Komachi embraced him. But he was patience, he only waited for her to stop, and only moved when he stroked her hair gently.
Minutes went and although Komachi stopped crying neither of them could move from their positions until Komachi let go. She still looked down embarrassed downwards and then she was ready.
"Natsu…I don't think I cant go through this. People expect much from me and I don't think I can live up to it…", Komachi finally managed to say.
An awkward silence began to spread as Natsu didn't reply quick. Komachi kept looking down as she was afraid of Natsus reaction. But then suddenly a hand held her chin up so she got eye contact with Natsu which made her blush even more and lowered gaze.
"So that was what its all about? Komachi, you can't quit now. You've worked so hard that its all waste stopping. Just because you been through a lot this couple of days it doesn't mean you have to stop now. Okay, everybody expect a lot from you, but thats only because they love your book...", he smiled at bit."...and I love it too".
Komachi finally looked up and looked at Natsu.
" Thanks Natsu...and you are right. I have worked hard and theres no way I will stop now.", she said and softly laid her head at Natsu's chest.
´I always feel better when I talk with Natsu...´.
"Natsu…you know what? I used to be afraid telling you this, but know I just wanna say it straight up".
"Tell me what?".
Komachi breathed out:
"I used both of us as the main characters in my new published book, and I didnt told you ealier because I was afraid of your reaction...it seemed like a good inspiration...", she explained and took another breath while she blushed more than ever. Natsu just smiled and hugged the blushing Komachi. She looked surprised at him.
"You don't have to be afraid anylonger…", and as he finished that sentence he gently kissed Komachi.
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