Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Shining S.T.A.R.S.

My own version of the first Mystery Dungeon game, with an alternate perspective on the progression of the events and when/how they occur.

Don't forget the disclaimer Naxi.

I know Hunter, I was just getting to that. (Clears throat) Ahem:

The pokemon name belongs to gamefreak and the pokemon company, not me or any of my personalities, if it did, there would be alot more Mystery Dungeon Games.

One quick note:

"This is speech"

"This is thought"

Enjoy…

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Chapter One: First Moments

There was only blackness before him…

"Where am I?" He thought, "Is this some kind of dream?"

"Huh? There's some kind of breeze…"

"..."

"What? Was that a voice?"

"......"

"I think someone's calling me…"

".......Excuse me,"

"I can hear it now…"

"Get up… Hey, are you alright? Say something!"

"Ugh… I would if I could…"

"....come on wake up."

His blue eyes snapped open, and he was briefly blinded by the midday sunlight. A voice called out from his left, "Your finally awake, thank goodness!"

Things coming back into focus, he looked toward the source of the voice, and was surprised to find himself looking at a mudkip.

"You were passed out there, I was kinda worried and uh… I've been trying to wake you up for some time now." The mudkip backed up, giving him some room.

"How can I understand you? Your a pokemon." He questioned, not quite fully awake.

She pointed at him and replied, "What do you mean by that? Your a pokemon and I understand you."

"What?" He muttered in shock. He got up and ran over to a near by stream. Upon looking into the stream, he was shocked to see a blue-eyed pikachu looking back. "It-it-it's me, I have blue eyes, and no pikachu ever has those, at least not normally…" He somehow rationalized. Quickly looking himself over, he stared at his hands like he'd never seen them before, and even grabbed his tail to actually feel it as a part of himself.

"This-this can't really be happening, I-I'm supposed to be a human!" he came to grasp the gravity of the situation.

At a loss for words, he finally got a look around at his surroundings. They where in some kind of forest, with a few trees scattered around, hours-old dew glinting off the leaves. The stream he was standing by was crystal clear, he could see the small pebbles sitting on the shallow bottom. The light-green grass that covered the clearing was long and felt soft under foot. As well, the sun was also low in the sky, casting everything in a soft orange glow.

"A Human?", the mudkip joined him by the stream, "Are you sure?"

"Yeah…", Naxi resumed staring at his reflection in the stream.

"Well… What was your name?" she came between him and the stream.

"My name?", He struggled, "oh that's right my name is..."

"Naxi ," He said aloud, "My name is Naxi."

"Oh, your name's Naxi?" A grin began to spread across her face.

"Yeah, is something wrong with that?" he questioned.

"Well.... It's a funny name!" she burst out laughing.

"Oy,ve." he muttered. "Wait, Oy ve? What is that? Why do I feel like I'm missing something?" Then he realized, he could barely remember anything about his life as a human!

"What happened to me?" he concentrated, his face scrunching up with the effort "Gah! I really can't remember anything accept my name! Ahh! This is so frustrating!" His face twitched slightly as he angrily contemplated his loss.

"Well." she looked him right in the eyes, "If you don't have any plans, you can come with me."

Seeing as he had no other Ideas, he decided that he'd take her up on her offer.

"I'm not to sure, but it's not like I've got anything better to do.", Naxi moved away a little.

"Are you sure your alright?", She backed up a little, looking him over.

"I'm fine really, but…"

"But what?"

Naxi blushed a little, "Your offering to help me, and I can't even properly thank you."

"What do you mean?"

"You… Haven't even told me your name yet."

"Oh,", She looked a little embarrassed, "I'm sorry, My name's Victoria."

"Victoria, thank you for helping me out, I have a feeling I'm going to need all the help I can get."

"Really? Do you have any Idea how this happened to you?"

"Not a clue, even less since I seem to have Amnesia."

"You… lost your memory?" Victoria gasped, seeming to become even more sorry for him.

"Now, what were you saying about your place?", he asked, uncomfortable with the matter.

She seemed to take the hint, "Oh, yah you can come with me, I've got a place that's just perfect."

She led him out of the clearing.

They arrived at a little hut structure shortly afterwards.

"Nice place," he commented, "You live here?"

"Actually no," Victoria walked in front of the structure, "My family owns the property, but we haven't done anything with it."

"So you think your parents will be fine with me living here?" he asked, looking the place over.

Victoria looked a little sad as she said, "Actually, I'm on my own, and it's part of my inheritance."

As realization hit him, pity seeped into his words, "So you lost your parents didn't you?"

Victoria gave a sad look as she replied, "Yes, they were attacked by a group of bandits, ruthless robbers, and w-we never found them, but bandits never take prisoners, they only make the evidence disappear…"

"Harsh," He found himself worrying more about her problems, and less about his own.

"Still," She looked up, seemingly shaking off painful memories, "technically It's my property to do with as I chose, and well you are my friend, so I feel like I should help you out."

"It's quite a generous offer," He mused, bringing his paw/hand to his chin.

She seemed confused, "Is it too much?"

"No, It's perfect!", he happily burst out, "Thank you!" he gave her a big hug.

She seemed taken aback by his sudden happy outburst because up till that point she'd only seen him acting serious.

"A-Are you feeling ok, Naxi?" She stammered.

Still lost in bliss he Replied, "I'm Fine! Just really Happy! Things are finally starting to look up."

"Ok, It's just a little weird when someone changes like that all of a sudden." She replied.

Taking a deep breath he calmed down, "Sorry, I don't know where that rush came from."

"It was kind of strange…" Victoria Muttered.

"Well, I guess I must have had some quirks as a human…" Naxi trailed off, once again reminded of his own predicament.

Seeing the depressed look on Naxi's face, Victoria decided to try and encourage him, "Hey, don't worry Naxi, I'm sure you'll get your memory back eventually…"

"Yeah," Naxi agreed in depressed sarcasm, "Maybe in a million years…"

Seeing her encouragement having no effect, she tried another tactic, " Naxi, I want you to know, I consider you my friend. That means I'll do whatever I can to help you out…"

Shaking off his depression, Naxi looked up, hope shining deeply in his blue eyes "Thanks V, I'm sorry I let it get to me. You're my friend too, and I should accept your support. Not wallow in self-pity…"

After their moment in front of the hut, Victoria broke the silence, "Well, it's getting late, guess you should get adequated with your new home. Also, I'll come by tomorrow morning."

"Ok, see you tomorrow.", Naxi waved goodbye as Victoria walked away.

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First chapter. Please Review, constructive criticizim is greatly appreciated as this is my first fic.

Flamers will be hunted down and eviserated, so if it's not a reveiw or constructive critisim keep it to yourself.