OK... This is my first Fanfic, so it might not be that good please be patenit with me on my stories :) Well, I'm Darien you can call me D. In this story Ella's gonna have powers and Angel is a little bit older. The characters may be OOC.

Well... Heres the story.

Chapter 1

"GET UP!" Shouted my leader, Allison. Now you might be wondering what i'm talking about. Well, let me explain. My name is Maximum Ride, Max for short, and i live with my many siblings in the wilderness of somewhere northwest. i'm not stupid! i'm not gonna give you my location! Anyway, I live with, as you can probably tell, Allison. Her second in command is my older sister, Ella. Ella and Fang are the only two that keep me from running away. I live with Alli, Fang, Gazzy, Nudge, Angel, Ari, Iggy, and Ella. Allison is 19, with bleach blonde hair and baby blue eyes. Ella has straight brown hair, milk chocolate brown eyes, and tan skin. She's 16. Fang has black hair, black eyes, and olive tan skin. He's 15. Me, I have dirty blonde hair, brown eyes that lok like unbarfed chocolate, and i'm pale. I'm 15. Gazzy has golden blonde hair, blue eyes, and he's pretty tan. He's 14. Nudge has carmel colored skin, dark brown eyes and the same color hair as her eyes. She's 14. Iggy has bleached blond hair, grey eyes and he's pale white. He's 16. Angel looks exactly like Gazzy, golden blonde hair and blue eyes. She's 10. Last is Ari, he has black hair, green eyes, and is very pale. He's 8. The thing about us, we have powers. Me, Fang, Ari, and Ella all have wings. Fang's wings are black with purple. Mine are white with brown and tan speckles. Ari's are plane white. Ella's are grey with a little bit of red. Alli and Angel have mind powers. Angel can talk to people through your head, and Alli can make you do things without you being aware that you are. Nudge, Gazzy, and Iggy can all talk to animals.

"Come on Maxie! Get your lazy butt up!" Allison shouted thorugh my door.

"5 more hours!" I shouted back.

"Max don't make me come in there!" She threatened.

"Ohhh i'm so scared!" I mumbled sarcaticly. I was fast asleep when i felt myself get lifted up. I opened my eyes a bit to see Iggy carrying me down the stairs.

"Nooooooooo!" I whined. i felt his chest rumble with a laughter.

"Sorry, got orders from the boss to get you out of bed." I glared up at him and he just smirked. WE walked down to the living room and he finally dropped me on the couch. But, before he did he didn't look to see if anyone was there, and there was someone. That someone happened to be my best friend Fang.

"Sorry, Iggy dropped me."

"It's all good. But get up." And with that said Fang pushed me off the couch. I landed on the floor with aloud thump. I will get him back. he better watch out. I said in my head.

(Angel underlinded, Max Italics)

"Don't be mean Maxie!" Angel shouted into my head.

"Angel! What did i tell you about getting in my head!" I yelled.

"Sorry!" Then i felt angel leave my head. Time for revenge on Fangy. I smile evily.

And that was chapter one! i hope it was good. Remember it's my first Fanfic! Reviews please? And be truthful :) I'll try to update everyother day. and i know not all the word will be spelled right.

Bye for now.

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