Your Scent
Your scent still lingers
in the calm night air.
The fragile mixture of rose petals
and your soft sweet skin.
It continuously haunts
my once peaceful nights.
Your scent still lingers.
Forever reminding me
that you are gone.
But with each passing night
it grows weaker and weaker.
As it fades into oblivion.
Your scent still lingers.
And it helps me carry on,
as I slowly fade into eternity.
And I will carry your fragile scent
with me into the great unknown.
As I draw my final breath.
Okay there you have it, my work in progress. I am still studying poetry in
hopes of improvement but I just had to post this one. So am I getting
better, worse, or about the same? Please review and tell me. As for now
I'm back to studying.
Your scent still lingers
in the calm night air.
The fragile mixture of rose petals
and your soft sweet skin.
It continuously haunts
my once peaceful nights.
Your scent still lingers.
Forever reminding me
that you are gone.
But with each passing night
it grows weaker and weaker.
As it fades into oblivion.
Your scent still lingers.
And it helps me carry on,
as I slowly fade into eternity.
And I will carry your fragile scent
with me into the great unknown.
As I draw my final breath.
Okay there you have it, my work in progress. I am still studying poetry in
hopes of improvement but I just had to post this one. So am I getting
better, worse, or about the same? Please review and tell me. As for now
I'm back to studying.