A/N so yeah I'm an avid fan fiction reader and I occasionally write one shots for my friends so I thought I'd give a longer story a chance and se how id do I'm having Hinata retain some of the determination she had in the chunin exams just so you understand why she acts the way she does
A/N re-upload I thank the user that reminded me about the spelling and grammar problems I tried getting some friends to look it over for me but they never had a chance but I did notice they didn't say that they didn't like the story so I guess I'm not failing there any ways this up load is mostly grammar and cosmetic based
I don't own Naruto but I wish I did
Without any further ado
Awakenings
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It was October 10th and life in Konoha was moving at a normal pace birds where singing children where playing and preparations for the kyu-bi festival where going as scheduled all in all for most it was a happy day but fore one young Shinobi this was the worst day of his life it seems some of the more enthusiastic villagers chose to celebrate early this year by sneaking in to Naruto's apartment the night before and attacking the pore boy in his sleep and almost destroying his apartment before the ANBU stopped them it was on this morning that Naruto woke up groggy and confused not because of the state his apartment was in but because he woke up strapped to a hospital bed
'Oi, what the hell get me out of this thing' yelled a disgruntled Naruto
'NA-RU-TO shut up its to early for you to be this loud' yelled a ticked Tsunade
'Ba-chan what happened why am I in the hospital' asked a surprised Naruto
'That's what I was going to ask you brat, last night I was going through preparations for tonight's festival and the next thing I know Shizune barges into my office panicked because an ANBU dropped you off at the hospital half dead. What in the hell did you do to piss off the villagers so bad that they would attack you in your sleep?
'I didn't do anything' Naruto screamed as he fought his restraints
' Yeah right don't give me any of that crap, if it wasn't you who was it?' Tsunade demanded
'It was the fourth Hokage' Naruto mumbled
' The fourth' Tsunade said in a fit of laughter ' what could he have done to get them pissed at you'
'He saved the village' Naruto sighed hearing this Tsunade bit her lip and mentally kicked herself for forgetting his tenant and how the villagers viewed him
'Naruto' Tsunade sighed ' I'm sorry' hearing this Naruto looked at her with his eyes wide 'some times I forget to take the fox into account when I'm thinking about you because I don't see you like that, I forget that others don't necessarily share my view point and because of that you got hurt and for that I'm sorry' she finished with a kind smile
Ba-chan you don't have to …' Naruto began before he was cut off by Tsunade
' How about I have some ramen delivered to make it up to you' Tsunade said clapping her hands together
' Oh yeah' Naruto shouted pumping his fist in the air
'…Naruto' Tsunade said
'Yeah ba-chan' Naruto replied
'How did you get out of those restraints?' she asked
'I don't know' Naruto said puzzled at how he did that him self ' power of ramen I guess' he said with a chuckle
At this they both started laughing
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As mornings went this was a good one for the heiress of the hyuga clan gently waking up to the sound of songbirds outside her window was a very pleasant experience as she got ready she kept glancing over to a present on her bed side table
' This year I will give it to him.' she said and started blushing 'I hope he likes it.'
She slipped the present into her backpack as she left her room and started making her way to the front door with a smile on her face
'So Ne-chan who's the present for?' Hanabi said with a coy smile
'W-what p-present' Hinata stuttered mentally kicking herself because of it
' The orange and blue one in your bag. Who is it for?' she said almost forcing Hinata into a corner
'I-its for one of my friends there b-birthday is today and I wanted to be s-sure they got it' she blurted out
'Birthday who's birthday' Hanabi said with a playful glair
' A f-friends' Hinata repeated
' I got that but who's' Hanabi asked again
' S-sorry I-I have t-to go bye hanabi' Hinata stuttered out as she darted past her sister she ran out the front door and met up with her team or at least the able bodied
members of it at the mission hall
'Hello Kurenai sensei hello Shino-san' Hinata said
'Hello Hinata' they both said
'So Kurenai sensei what mission are we going to receive today?' Hinata asked
'I don't know yet but we are quite limited with Kiba out of commission' Kurenai explained as they entered the building
As they entered they where pulled to the side by an ecstatic Shizune
'Team eight just the people I was looking for' Shizune exclaimed ' I need you for a delivery mission order by the Hokage her self' she explained
'Delivery mission?' Kurenai asked
'Yes it seems she wants 20 bowls of ramen delivered to the hospital ASAP' at this point Hinata perked her head up already finishing the math in her head
'Twenty bowls what does she need with that much…' she began but was cut off by Hinata
'We'll take it' Hinata exclaimed to the surprise of everyone in the group and a few passers by
'Well I guess I can't argue with that' Kurenai said with a sweat drop
'Well ok the drop off point is room 164 ant the hospital' Shizune began but was cut off
'I'll meet you guys there' Hinata said running for the door
'Wait Hinata we don't have all the…'Kurenai began but stopped when Hinata was out of sight
'Kurenai sensei if i'm not mistaken I believe Hinata knows more about this mission than any of us do that is if I'm correct in assuming the delivery is for Naruto?' Shino asked
' Yep' Shizune replied along with a nod
'And if I'm not mistaken in her abilities' Shino continued 'she should be able to handle this mission on her own so may I suggest we take another mission as well'
' I guess it couldn't hurt' kurenai asked looking at Shizune
'Well I guess not' Shizune said indicating for them to follow her
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Hinata was running at top speed to Ichiraku ramen shop with a happy and determined look in her eyes
When she arrived she entered the stand a little out of breath
'ohio gizamashte' she chimed as she entered
'Oh Hinata-chan what can I do for you today' Ayame asked
'I was sent by the Hokage to order and deliver 20 bowls of ramen to her at the hospital' answered Hinata
'Really so what did Naruto get himself into this time' Ayame asked
' I don't know but this was the perfect chance for me to give Naruto his birthday present'
'Oh yeah it is his birthday isn't it tell you what I'll throw in a few more bowls and let you use the cart for your delivery. How does that sound?' Asked Ayame
'Oh no Ayame-chan you don't have to do that' Hinata protested
'Nonsense its not like you'd be able to carry it otherwise now meet me around back and you can get on your way' she said
'Thanks again Ayame-chan I know Naruto will love it' Hinata said as she pushed the cart
' Do your best' Ayame shouted as Hinata walked away
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When she arrived at the hospital Hinata was yelled at my the nurse at the front desk for bringing the cart into the hospital when Hinata explained that Tsunade herself ordered the ramen the nurse laughed at Hinata's story claiming that the Hokage would never be caught eating such filth
'I'll prove it then' Hinata said as she bolted for room 164 with the cart and a yelling nurse in toe
As she made her way down the hall, the sent of ramen filled the air Hinata stopped outside the room and knocked Tsunade answered the door and greeted the raven haired girl and ushered her glairing at the trailing nurse Hinata entered the room and was instantly greeted by Naruto who was sitting cross legged on the bed meanwhile across the hall in an unnamed coma patients room a woman with long vibrant red hair started to stir as the sent of ramen entered her room after a couple seconds her eyes bolted open and she ran for the door and the ramen behind it
'Hay Hinata how are you doing?' asked Naruto
'I-I'm good n-Naruto-kun how are you feeling?
'Better now that i'm not tied up. So where's the ramen?' Naruto asked
'I-its out in the hall Ayame-chan sent the cart and extra ramen as a birthday gift' Hinata explained
'Sweet u want to join us Hinata-chan? He asked
'S-sure n-Naruto-k-kun' she stuttered as her face became red from the chan he added
'Awesome lets get to it dattebyo' he said as he made his way to the door but when he opened it he was in for a big surprise all the ramen was gone the red haired woman was finishing off the last noodle as he registered what happened
'Oi what the hell you doing to my ramen' Naruto yelled
' Your ramen, I don't see your name on it brat dattebane' she said pointing chopsticks at him
'Who the hell are you anyways dattebyo' Naruto yelled as Tsunade made her way into the hall
'K-Kushina ' Tsunade said in utter shock
'Hay Tsunade how are ya doing can you tell this brat to back off before I beat the shit out of him dattebane
'K-Kushina' Tsunade repeated how are you alive' Tsunade asked
'Was it that bad things are kind of fuzzy how are Minato and my son where are they' asked Kushina
At this point a curious Hinata entered the hall
'N-Naruto-kun who is this lady'
' Have no idea Hinata-chan' Naruto answered
At this Kushina dropped her bowl and chopsticks
'N-Naruto' Kushina said wide-eyed
'Yeah what do you want lady' Naruto said crossing his arms
'Y-your name is n-Naruto' she asked
'Yeah what of it' he responded
At this point Tsunade snapped out of her stupor
'Kushina you've been in a coma for thirteen years' she said
'Oi ba-chan who is this lady' asked Naruto
'She's your…your mother' Tsunade answered
Suddenly three thumps where herd and when Tsunade looked around Naruto, Hinata, and Kushina where all sprawled on the floor
A/N well thanks for reading please rate and comment I would appreciate reviews longer than one sentence if possible and you can be as ruff as you like I want to know my mistakes and what I need to work on also I put certain things in that I want to see if you catch