hey everyone,

i'm new here so don't kill me if i accidently make a mary-sue because i don't know what a Mary Sue is. so if someone please wants to tell me what that is i would be happy. well... let's get started

disclaimer: i sadly enough don't own the hobbit...

bold is in dwarves

bold and italic elvish

italic thoughts

normal, happenings and in the common tongue.

KYRA POV...

well, after a long day at school of being picked at by the prissy's i decided to go to my training. i walked into the building and smiled at Nana-sé, my older sister who started training me when i was 6. now then years later i train in karate, boksing, swordfighting and knife throwing. i also try to learn from movies like LOTR or the hobbit. those are my favorite movies for ever. that's enough about my interests. i'm small like 1.40 metres and i love it. my hair is short, straight and black as the night. i wear it mostly into a ponytail. i have i scar of a dog scratch in my face over my eye. yes i'm lucky to have my eyesight on that eye. i also have a scar from my belly to my neck and one from my toe to my hip. yeah i came into a lots of fights. my eyes are white complete. no pupil or iris. i don't have big boobs, around 65A and i'm not so curvy. skinny and also very graceful.

After training i started to feel very dizzy. I took my sword in my hand. Luckily just in time because right after that i fell down. "what's wrong with me. i never have accidents like this. what's happening?" and after that i fell down and let blackness take over my vision.

thanks for the comments. at the time i posted the first i diden't understand how worked. English is not my first language but feel free to tell me if something is wrong. well bye and thanks for reading. sorry for the very short chapter, i promise to make the next one much longer