Hi everyone. This is my first Death Note story, so I would really appreciate some feedback.
Disclaimer: Drath Note is not mine
Misa's Point of View
How I hate that Ryuzaki, chaining himself to MY boyfriend! Wasn't he even ashamed of himself? But I wanted to behave properly for my Light. I changed into my thin, lacy black negligee before going to wish Light good night.
It disgusted me how that Ryuzaki could always see my Light. How jealous I was! I tiptoed quietly so Yagami-san couldn't hear me. He had actually put a curfew on when I could see my own boyfriend.
I made my way over to the room where I paused before knocking. I wanted to make sure my clothes were enticing enough to lure Light to bed. I was just about to knock when I heard them talking inside.
"Don't leave me…Raito-kun…I love you."
Eh, what? I nearly fell back and hit the opposing wall in the shocking daze that followed.
"Ryuzaki?" I heard the unmistakable voice of Light, but it was soft and mumbled. My Light would betray me?
That's when I heard it, the repulsive sound…of a kiss, "Shleerppp…" Wah!
I couldn't contain myself any longer and began banging on the door fiercely, "Ryuzaki, you pervert. Lemme in this instant!"
I heard a small sigh emanate from the other side of the door as it clicked and swung open.
Ryuzaki was in his usual attire of a white shirt and blue jeans. Didn't he ever change his clothes? In his hand was a melting ice cream cone. The faint hum of the TV was in the background.
I stormed past him…to find Light on the floor? Looking ruffled?
I rounded on Ryuzaki, "What did you do to my boyfriend?" I was bawling by the time I finished the sentence, but I felt someone grasp me from behind.
"Light?" I whispered.
He looked irritated but mostly sleepy, "What are you doing here, Misa?"
"I wanted to say goodbye to you, but I heard Ryuzaki here being dirty,"
"Misa-sama," Ryuzaki began innocently, "What are you talking about?"
"You confessed your love to my boyfriend!" I pouted. "Besides, what is he doing on the floor?"
Light ran his fingers through his hair in irritation while Ryuzaki looked amused, "Misa-chan, those lines were from the movie I was watching. I didn't say anything."
"No," I said stubbornly, "You said 'Don't leave me…Raito-kun…I love you."
"Misa," Light looked cranky, "Ryuzaki was watching Casablanca. It was just a coincidence that in the middle of that dialogue, you heard him say my name. He was about to warn me that I was going to fall off the edge of the bed. And, I did. I was surprised at hearing his voice while sleeping and fell off."
His voice suggested that he was annoyed and embarrassed to admit to this.
"Hmph," but I decided to believe Light. I quickly pecked him on the cheek. Both of their eyes were trained on me as I left the room.
"Shleerppp…" Wah! Again?
I turned around, "Ryuzaki, you idiot…you dare kiss my boyfriend?"
"Misa-chan," he said as I faced him, "Look."
And there it was, in his hand…a freshly licked ice cream cone.
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