Ayane's Afternoons (Revised)
Afternoon # 1
Ayane settled down in a chair next to the pool. The toothpick in her martini glass was moving with the breeze. She smiled and closed her eyes. "Heya" Tina said hovering over Ayane's face. Ayane opened her eyes. "Hey girl" Ayane said sitting up. "Wanna play Butt bounce?" Tina said smirking as she jumped into the pool. The water splashed on Ayane. "You're on" Ayane yelled as she jumped in the pool after her.
Ayane grabbed the Butt Bounce board. She pulled herself on it. "Tina?" she said looking for her. Tina grabbed Ayane's foot, and pulled her into the water. "You!" Ayane laughed as they both got on the butt bounce board. They turned to each other's back. "321 go!" they both yelled simultaneously. Ayane threw her but at Tina. Tina dodged, and threw her butt back at Ayane. Ayane stumbled. Ayane dodged another attack from Tina's butt. "hey' Tina said laughing. Ayane pushed her butt with force towards Tina. Tina flew into the water. "I am the winner!" Ayane said falling back into the water.
THE END… LOL…. Very short I know, but the new revised chapters will be longer, it may take awhile for me to update since I'm revising all my stories.
F E I L D Y
2008-09-03 . chapter 4
The idiot below me doesn't realize he's responding to a post made almost a year ago.
I might add that in that year, your writing has improved tremendously. That first chapter was Godawful, but this is an improvement.
It's still a pointless Lesbian fic, but at least you can read it.
jannbusa
2008-07-28 . chapter 2
oh my god that was funny randome but funny and don't listen to that feildy guy hes probably just like a 30 year old that lives with his mom and this site is his **. but please continue
F E I L D Y
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
Just what we needed... yet another boring, short, pointless lesbian fic...
Thanks To both of them to make become a better riter…….writer…..