ok this is my first fanfic so constructive criticism and any helpful tips is much appreciated i don't own anything halo and star wars belong to there respective owners.
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/ uplink conformed to the unsc heavy cruiser noble
/ time 1830 2572
/ location above reach
/ current mission resupply and pick up new "captain"
/ " a request to board detected a 'noble six' wants to board is permission granted sir?"
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/permission granted "welcome aboard the unsc heavy cruiser noble captain B312 I am your new ships ai nicknamed patton it's truly a pleasure to work with you." a gruff sounding ai said over the long range comms.
/ "thankyou patton it's an honor to work with you and to lead such a fine ship" a all too familiar voice said by a slightly old B312 (when i mean slightly old he would be around his late 50s early 60s but more on that latter).
soon a pelican landed with a small thud as the back hatch opened up to reveal a steel spartan III in mark V (b) armor or what looked to be mark 5 (b) armor in actuality was the mark VII armor just made to look like its older brother. this was noble six spartan B312 a hyper lethal vector and a one of two surviving members of noble team.a marine noticed him and with a stunned face before said face went pale with horror and quickly going to attention and yelling " captain on deck" everything went quiet since everyone was wondering what would happen some couldn't see their 'new captain'. those that did had the same reaction as the first six decided on quickly made his way over towards the door as when he was mid way he called out and "as you were" so the marines could do there work. He had a lot of work to do and to give a speech oh how he hated speeches. soon he made to the elevator that would take him to the command center. soon he arrived and when he did he got a good surprise especially when an bloody nosed odst got shoved into him.
…"ok what's going on" six asked as he held the odst from dropping like a bag of bricks so he set him down easy " i said what's going on damn it now answer your captain sailors". six was not happy "first day and i have to deal with this crap already noble give me strength" thought.
OK first chapter is done sorry for no action and its short but it hopefully wont be next chapter will explains everything about how 6 lived fall of reach. also i may need help with this so if any one would that be appreciated greatly so thanks in advance. till next time destroyer sighing off / transmission ended...
