Hi, it's me ADV and this story is MAYXPAUL in my last one I comments of people saying there weren't many of these stories so I decided I'd try my best to have a Farwawayshipping chapter story. Which means if I get A review I'll probably update. I don't know if this is really good, but I want to try my keep the chapters coming if you want them. This story is mostly off the top of my head (again) but I have an idea to where I want this story to go. Please comment on this chapter and tell me what you think.

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Chapter One

"Are you sure he meant 'casual' as in T-shirt and jeans. Maybe it was 'casual dress' you know, he didn't make it very clear." May Cayden asked while putting up different shirts in front her while looking into the her body length mirror.

"Yes, May. I'm sure. I dated Paul for almost a year, I think I'd know what he means by the 'casual' look. Her best friend Dawn Amero replied almost huffing. "I can't even believe you're going out with him only two months after we broke up."

"Are you mad, because if you want I'll cancel-"

"Don't even May, I already told you, it's perfectly fine. I just can barely believe what a match you guys are."

"Really?" the brunette asked. "You think we're a good match?"

"Good match?" she asked emphasizing the words. "You guys are probably soul mates"

"Thanks Dawn, I don't know what I'd do without you!"

"Nothing of course, you depend on my words of wisdom too much to even walk out your front door at six 'o' clock in the morning." said the blue haired teen crossing her arms over her chest in and sticking her nose in the air.

May sighed and threw herself on her bed. It was a canopy- pink with a fluffy mattress and hundreds of pillows everywhere. "So how are things going with you and your mom? I haven't heard much since the last time you spent the night."

"We're okay, we've been working things out instead of just giving each other the silent treatment." she answered as she also sat down on May's pale pink comforter. "Good start, don't you think?"

"Of course! That's great news." May crawled up to her seat pillow and leaned her back into it. "Where do you think Paul is going to take me tonight?"

"Well, probably not a fancy restaurant. And I hope he doesn't plan on letting you meet his family, like he did with me. He told me to dress semi-casual and didn't even tell me what we were doing. Worst night ever."

"What happened again?" asked the brunette, slightly sitting up.

"His parents can be so rude I mean when I first walked in the door I knew they were whispering about how we wouldn't last. It was terrible from that moment on."

She went into telling her about how they treated her and commented on her outfit (which cost about $280 all together–and none of those comments were really nice). All and all it was one was the Top 10 Worst Nights of Her Life it came in at number two right above the time a cheese cake Ash Ketchum had thrown landed on her head, and right below her seeing 30 men eat 100 raw fish (she had also watched them throw it up too–none at her own choice).

"Wow." May whispered in aw. "I don't think I can go through with this anymore."

"What? Yes, you can do it. I'm positive about that you can. Anyway," she continued, "it's not like you're meeting them tonight anyway." Dawn shrugged and gave May a calm smile.

"Thank you again Dawn for the insight." May said gratefully.

"No problem, now we have to get back to picking out the perfect casual outfit that will work for any date experience."

"Okay! We have to hurry, I only have...two hours left." May said as she looked up toward the clock on here wall.

"Well, then hurry!"

They both jumped off the bed and ran to her closet (walk in with a silky pink carpet).

After fixing her hair into a high ponytail and putting on her carefully chosen outfit, May and Dawn heard the doorbell ring.

"It's him!" May whispered excitedly. "What do I do?"

"May," Dawn replied looking exasperated, "you've gone out on a date before."

"Yeah, so? I'm nervous. Help me!"

"May?" her mother yelled from down stairs.

"Uh, yeah mom?" she asked.

"Your date is here to pick you up!"

"Okay, I'll be down in a minute!" she called down, then added. "Don't let Daddy near him, okay?"

"Of course dear!"

May turned back to Dawn to get some reassurance.

"You look amazing, you're going to have a great time and then tell me all about it when you get back tonight."

"Yeah, I can't wait. I better hurry and get down there so Daddy doesn't go berserk on him, like he did with Bradley."

"Yeah, that was really bad. So go on hurry. We don't want him to freak out Paul." then she put her finger to her chin and added, "Even though I'm not sure if that is possible."

They both giggled.

May then grabbed her Blackberry and waved bye to her friend. "See you later Dawn!"

"Bye May! Have fun on you're date!" her friend said as she shut May's bedroom door. "So...tired..." she mumbled as she stumbled her way to May's bed and fell onto it, with her feet hanging off. She sighed.

"There you are May!" said the teens mom as she made her way into the doorway.

May turned to her and apologized for taking so long.

"It's okay dear, but try and be quicker next time, I've been having trouble keeping your dad out of the area. Okay?"

"Alright. Thank you Mom!"

She then turned to the teen boy standing next to the door. "Sorry." she apologized.

He shook his head. "No worries, everything is fine. You ready to go then?"

"Uh, yeah of course!" she said after she looked herself over. Gosh, she just loved this outfit. She wore some dark orange converse with purple Sharpie flowers on the toes of them. She on some dark denim skinny capris on, and for a shirt she wore a deep collar, dark green loose top that stretched down to just below her jean zipper. 'No matter where we go tonight, I'll be ready.' May thought to herself.

"You look great." Paul commented.

"Thank you very much. You do too." a light shade of red cover May's cheeks as she looked down at her shoes.

With that they went out to his car. He opened the door for her and shut once she was in. While he walked around to the other side of the vehicle May glanced around at his car. She remember that the outside was blue, and the interior was leather.

"Nice car." she complimented as he got in.

"Yeah, thanks. I've had it for a while. I need to get it cleaned though, it's pretty dirty."

May looked around, this car wasn't dirty at all, it looked pretty spotless to her...maybe it was just her sight.

"Don't worry," he comment notice her confused look, "I'm kind of a clean freak- got it from my mom."

"Oh, that's okay." she smiled brightly and turned to look out the window.

It was still light out, so the street lights weren't on just yet.

"I'm surprised," he said making her turned towards him.

"Huh?"

"Usually any other girl would be already asking me where we're going."

"Oh." she said, this caused her blush...again.

"Why haven't you asked?"

"I just didn't think to, I was very content where I was. You know?"

"Sure." he replied as he turned onto the main street.

They road on in silence for about two more minutes, then he turned into a parking lot and parked.

"We're here." he said as he unlocked the doors.

Ready to comment? Please tell me what you think, I may sound desperate but a lot of people read the story and just leave and I'm sitting here wondering...did they like it? Did they hate it? Was it too mediocre? Should I take it down?

And I hate thinking those questions because then I get insecure about my story and that's when things go downhill and I start to actually take deleting the story as an option.

Please comment, anonymous reviews are welcome! Even some calm criticism is okay. Just please, again, tell me what you think your opinions matter to me.

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