Author's note: I don't own Naruto... This story takes place in the Grass Village and none of the actual naruto characters will show up for a long time...
This story goes along with hellking's story Destruction of Sound. I suggest you read it. It's really good and you'll under stand this a little better if you do. In my opinion... The reason why I'm writting this is because the Chero from his story is loosely based off me and the character he asked me to create. I asked him if I could elaborate on Chero's story and why she does certain things. He said yes and this tory was born.
I hope you enjoy it and please visit Devyn's site and read his story. I'll paste a link in my profile.
Here's the story. Review please and tell me how I'm doing. BTW I have a picture of Chero in my profile, so if you want to you can take a look.
This is a story about an Avenger. I know what you are thinking, "Ugh, another story about Sasuke.", but no this is a story about a girl named Chero who wants to avenge the death of the one person most precious to her. Her story of sadness and struggle to make things right. But this is not where our story begins, no our story begins 15 years earlier in a hospital room in the Village Hidden in the Grass.
Here we see a middle aged woman giving birth to her second child , a baby girl. The doctor and nurse jump into action to welcome the new child. The nurse carries the child off the get her cleaned and the doctor checks on the mother. A solemn look crosses his face. He turns to the father and son and sighs.
"She's losing blood at an alarming rate. I'm afraid we cannot save her."
"What?!" the father cried.
"You better say your goodbyes."
"Tsukiko..." he said clutching his wife's hands.
"Todo, it's alright. I'm just glad the baby's ok." she said smiling weakly.
"Mommy?" the five year old boy questioned wiping tears out of his eyes.
She reached out and pulled the boy into a half-hearted embrace.
"Don, my little Don. I want you to be brave now, ok?"
"Ok..."
"And I want you to take good care of your new sister. I want you to protect her for me. I want you to always remember that I will watch over you."
She then started to sing softly,
"The sun was shining down on me when I was given you
I swore I'd always be there
to help you thick and through
You are my son
my always and forever
Though I might not always be here
to show you all my love
I promise I'll be watching and helping from above
I am your mother
your giver and protector."
The nurse returned with the sleeping little girl in her arms, wrapped in a pink blanket with a matching cap covering her pink, bald, wrinkly head. She handed the child to her mother and smiled.
"What are you going to name her?"
"Chero." the mother said smiling, "I'm sorry my sweet little Chero, Don, and my dearest love, Todo ...It's time for me to go."
She gazed longingly one last time at her family and into her arms one last time before taking her last breath.
As the years went by and Chero ages, Don's fondness for his sister grows, and Chero growing fond of him. But as those years passed Todo's sadness grows and turns to hatred towards Chero.
Tell me how I'm doing. and i'm sorry that the Author's note was longer than the story part. There will be more soon I promise.
