Had such a bad writers block on this story that I decided that a lot had to be changed like the name and a bunch more…so I hope the people who read what I had before will like the new version…besides I've become a lot more of an experienced writer…though my spelling is probably a little off…But I took a story writing class and -
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Kira-: killer
Banpaia-vampire
Kira- banpaia: vampire killer/ slayer (I think…correct me if you disagree)
italics- thought
"text"-speech (no duh)
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Tajiya-Bankaia: Chapter 1: A new beginning
"This is our day!" Screamed a tall and slender woman. "We shall defeat the ones who have taken our young and destroyed our homes!" Her chocolate eyes burned with determination and she held up a long silver cross. "We will become a greater force the the banpaia!"
A loud cheer echoed from the crowd below. The woman's long light brown hair swayed in the wind.
"This is the time between the feudail era and the future! A time between!" Yelled a man from the crowd. He was looking at the women above with admiration. "We, the kira- banpaia, shall take our place in history!" His deep brown eyes cheered.
The women smiled down at him. The man had black raven hair that was messy in a way that couldn't be fixed and his voice was so encouraging and kind it sent shivers up the woman's spine.
Snapping out of her daze she concentrated once again at the task at hand.
"The banpaia will be sleeping during the day…but this is not the time we will kill them!"
The crowd whispered in confusion. The woman smiled to herself. Their previous leader, her uncle, had always attacked during the day…catching them off guard. She herself thought this a foolish and cowardly way of dealing with their problems.
"All of you listen to me! We will attack 2 hours before sunrise…during the dead of night we will hide the children and arm ourselves. I do not know when this will take place…a month-- a year! The timing has to be perfect…and I mean it when I say NO children." A groan came from a set of young teenagers knowing that though they knew the proper ways of defense they could still not fight in this battle.
"You are leading us to our death!" Came the loud shrill of a middle age woman. She was holding her young child's hand tightly with one hand and clutching her husband's shirtsleeve with the other.
"Many of us could be bitten and the banpaia and become another extra warrior against us." Boomed the woman's husband.
Realization of this swept through the crowd and within seconds they were lashing out violently.
"Saka is NOT a fool!" came the voice that had so kindly encouraged her before. The handsome man pushed pass the crowd and onto the stage. He held the microphone in his hands. "Do you not all think she has reasons for her actions? Are you already having doubts on your woman leader who has slain more banpaia then any man? It is time you all listen to what she has to say!"
The woman smiled. I love being called by my name. He'sso encouraging in every way. And he speaks the truth. Many a time she would be looked at as weak because she was a woman and most people…mostly men…would look at this as a reason she should not be their leader.
"Hear what she has to say at least!" Screamed the man.
Saka smiled and put her hand on the man's shoulder. "That is enough…I think they understand." It was true. The look on all the peoples faces were stunned and filled with regret for doubting their leader.
The man bowed politely and seemed to have been completely unaware of his random appearance.
"Please excuse me, Saka. I am very interested in your plans and I didn't mean to embrass y…"
"You did not embarrass me. You encouraged me and I am grateful for it. Please, Jazu, will you ride with me into battle?" Saka smiled at the boy as she watched him puff up with happiness.
"I'll be happy to." Said the man, Jazu, and flashed a perfect smile.
Saka's smile brightened and she turned back to the crowd.
"You are right, sir. I realize that being bitten is a possibility." She nodded at the man who had scorned her. "But I'm sure you know that there are ways of keeping this from happening…such as bathing ourselves in holy water and keeping a cross around you neck at all times."
The man grunted.
"I know most of you were not happy in leaving your hometown's to come to this desolate land but you must know that no one outside of us are suppose to know…not the government nor the army or any one…except us. Some of us exceed in mobility and others in spirituality. It comes from your soul. And it is released by determination and courage or love. Young ones are able to restore joy to the depressed or weakened. Young women and men are able to give generosity to the injured and dead by giving their love. Women and men my age are able to fight and keep peace in our home and the elderly are able to keep people remembering and they are able to give hope and wisdom to every one around them. We are the ones who band together to keep our home beautiful."
A wave of energy came from the crowd. It seemed to be filled with determination and a proud feeling. Saka raised her staff like cross above her head and a long black light eminated over her and every one else. Then markings, on each of the people in the crowd's foreheads, appeared. Each was different. Saka's eyes became a deep maroon as hers, a silver sun, appeared on her forehead. Oner young child laughed as her small heart shaped crest formed in a pink hew then beaming up into the energy above her.
This time it would be different.
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Ya I know that chappie may have seemed a little weird…Its before Kagome is born but is after Inuyasha and the crew (obviously since there is a microphone) So I guesse…70's-ish lol. R&R thanx…2nd chappie coming up like…today at some time. Haha.