Chapter 1

The Meeting

Loren tate is a normal 18 year old girl that took mixed marshall arts when she was 5 years old to defened her slef against men, due to her dad leaving her and her mom when she was 4. Loren and Her mom have been getting in fights lightly due that todays the day her dad left which also is her birthday. Lorens idol was Eddie duran. He was Everything she ever wanted in a man. the sweetness and stuff like that. She didn't care about the money or fame. She wanted to know the really Eddie not Eddie Duran big huge rock star. Loren decided to go for a drive up to her spot and play some musicto clear her mmind abou that her birthday is just another day, so like every year she will go up to her spot and white music. Her friends try to get her to have a birthday party but like always Loren declines. Loren was walking up the hill and when she got there she grabed her stuff and sat by the old oak tree. it was about 6:30 at the Loren started writing down lyrics that poped into her head, rote them in her note book then began playing them on her gutiar.

Let me riddle you a ditty, it's just an itty bitty, little thing on my mind.
About a boy and a girl, trying to take on the world one kiss at a time.
Now the funny thing about, ain't a story without it, but the story is mine.
And I wish you could say, that it ended just fine.

We all want to know, how it ends.

Oh, happily ever after, wouldn't you know, wouldn't you know.
Oh, skip to the ending, who'd like to know, I'd like to know.
Author of the moment, can you tell me, do I end up, do I end up happy?

Inhale, breathe steady, exhale, like you're ready, if you're ready or not.
Just a boy and a girl trying to take on the world, and we want to get caught.
In the middle of a very happy ending, let's see what we've got, let's give it a shot.
Let's give it a shot.

We all want to know, how it ends.

Oh, happily ever after, wouldn't you know, wouldn't you know.
Oh, skip to the ending, who'd like to know, I'd like to know.
Author of the moment, can you tell me, do I end up, do I end up happy?

We all have a story to tell.
Whether we whisper or yell.
We all have a story, of adolescence and all it's glory.
We all have a story to tell.

Oh, happily ever after, wouldn't you know, wouldn't you know.
Oh, skip to the ending, who'd like to know, I'd like to know.
Author of the moment, can you tell me, do I end up, do I end up happy?

We all have a story to tell.
We all have a story to tell.
We all have a story to tell.
We all have a story to tell.

[ happily ever after- he is we ]

When Loren finished singing and struming her last note she hear claping behind her. there was a man standing behind her wearing sunglasses annd a dark hoodie. In One swiffed movemeant she got up and got in her marshall arts formation ready to kick who ever was there.

Man: oh i'm so sorry i didn't mean to disturb you. i just loved you song did you write it?

Loren: Well you failed. and yes i wrote it may i ask who i'm talling to?

Man: oh i'm sorry but if i tell you will you not freak out?

Loren: i would but i'm like 10 seconds away from making you the most unluckest man in the world

The man slowly took off his discise.

Man: i'm Eddie Duran.

Loren let her guard down and stood up srtight.

Loren: oh i'm sorry but i'm pretty sure you want to be here alone i'll just leave.

Loren quicklly started to pack her stuff up when she felt a hand on her arm.

Eddie: no no you don't have to leave i don't mind...

Loren: oh i'm sorry Loren, Loren Tate. i didn't bother telling you my name beacuse you don't really care.

Eddie: oh well Loren Tate. Who said i didn't care?

Loren: well all super stars don't wan't anything to do with us loners.

Loren let a tear fall from her eyes

Eddie: are you ok?

Loren: You don't care can i just leave.

Loren got out of His grip and finished picking her stuff up. Loren was now full blown crying but trying not to let him see her.

Eddie stoped her by grabing her and pulling her into a warm imbrace. Loren embraced him and cried into his shirt.

Eddie: shh. Shh it's ok your gonna be fine.

Loren slowly pulled back and looked into his eyes. Eddie took his thumb and wiped the tears away from her face.

Eddie: do you wan't to talk about it?

Loren: you don't want to hear me you just feel bad for me.

Eddie: no no come here sit

Eddie let go of her and went and sat bye the tree and pated the ground beside him. loren went over and sat next to him.

Eddie: ok hit me what's wrong.

Loren: i don't know i just meet you and i don't share this kind of stuff with anyone.

Eddie: well i'm here and i want to hear.

Loren: are you sure?

Eddie: positive.

Loren: ok here goes nothing. Well when i was 3, yesterday my dad took me up here to see a metor shower after my bed time and my mom was really mad. but me and my dad were having the best time. When it was over we went to a 24-7 diner and ordered wafflas for my birthday. then when we got home my mom was still up and yelled at me to get into bed. so i did as told and want to sleep. I heard a lot of yelling then i heard my dad saying he was leaving. i wen't out there and my dad had a suitcase and he said he was going to get some cigerets...

Loren paused and started crying

Loren: and the sad thing was he didn't even smoke. i started yelling his name. he didn't awnser so i ran after him while he was leaving but he closed the door on me. and i've never heard from him again. The worst part was it was my birthday.

Eddie: I-I I'm so sorry

Loren: don't be. So me and my mom have been fighting lightly beacuse today is the 14th aniversery my dad left.

Loren started to cry really hard and put her hands on her face and fell into her lap. Eddie grabed Loren and started rubing her back.

Eddie: so todays your birthday.

Loren: yes.

Eddie: well what are you doing here?

Loren sat up.

Loren: this is what i do on all of my birthdays. come up here and hope, just hope that i will be loved enough for once.

Eddie pulled her face up to his and caressed her face. He looked deep into her eyes and slowly leaned in and kissed her.

they were kissing for about 5 minutes then they pulled away and rested their foreheads on eachothers.

Eddie: Loren i swear that was the best kiss i ever had.

Loren: that was my only.

Eddie: Loren so your not doing anything tonite?

Loren: i neaver have anything to do

Eddie: would you like if i were to call some take out up here and we can have a picnic?

Loren: i would love that.

Eddie: great!

Eddie got up and called his driver to pick up some pastrami sandwitches.

Loren: how'd you know?

Eddie: know what?

Loren: that i like pastrami sandwitches.

Eddie: you like them?

Loren: More than like i would dress up as one just to get a free one.

They both laughed for a minutes or so.

Eddie: Well Miss Tate can i get your phone Number

Loren: yes as long as i get yours

Eddie: of course

Loren and Eddie swaped phones

Eddie: well miss tate can i hear another song?

Loren: i don't know

Eddie: please!

Loren: fine

Loren went and grabed her gutair and started playing another sone

Lalalalalalala
Love Life, what's that?
Lalalalalalala
Love Life, what's that?

Hush now.
Quiet down.
Can you hear my heart racing?
Falling to my knees cause I've been a chasing a lie. (a lie)
Love life
I don't know what I was thinking, dipped my toes in, now I'm sinking
I guess it hurts a bit but I'm over it now.

Heartaches and mistakes,
how many hits can a good girl take?
I'm tired of hurting, slowly learning
Irate you're too late.
Look at the mess that you've created
First date you, slight hate
Love life
What's that?

Lalalalalalalalala Love Life
What's that?
Lalalalalalalalala Love Life
What's that?

I tried,(i tried) yes I tried.
But it takes two to make it
I'm obsessed and you can't fake it
Denied
Deep inside
I wanna break your heart too
Lead you on and up to drop you.
I guess it hurts a bit but I'm over it now.

Heartaches and mistakes, how many hits can a good girl take?
I'm tired of hurting, slowly learning
Irate you're too late,
Look at the mess that you've created
First date you, slight hate
Love life
What's that?

Lalalalalalalalala Love Life
What's that?
Lalalalalalalalala Love Life
What's that?

Grey clouds above me
Like when you said you love me
Winds blowing me away
But part of me will always stay
Eyes closed, arms wide
Embrace the storm that I feel inside
No more crying, no more crying
I don't mind a chop or two
But god I love that sound, sound
Thunder of my inner chaos slowly calming
Down, down
I look up in the sky
No longer seeing you
Look up in the sky
See the sun coming through

Lalalalalalalalala Love Life
What's that?
Lalalalalalalalala Love Life
Heartaches and mistakes, how many hits can a good girl take?
I'm tired of hurting, slowly learning
Irate, you're too late,
Look at the mess that you've created
First date you, slight hate
Love life
What's that?
Lalalalalalalalala Love Life (What's that?)
Lalalalalalalalala Love Life (What's that?)

[ Love life- he is we ]

Eddie: Loren thats amazing!

Loren: thanks

Eddie: no i mean amazing, Loren would you liek to come over to my house to day and work on some music with me.

Loren: well it's getting dark.

Eddie: oh ya you must still be in high school.

Loren: ya i am but i was going to stay in my car all nite beacuse i don't want to see my mom anymore to day.

Eddie: i know this semes weird but would you like to stay at my house to nite i can drive you to school tomorrow and show all thoses kid that you know Eddie Duran

Loren: as much as i loved to but i don't have any of my stuff in my car.

Eddie: well i'll go with you to your house and go inside with you so you don't have to see your mom.

Loren: well...

Eddie: please you know you can't resisted

Loren: i really don't know

Eddie: well looks like our food is here let me go pay and you can think.

Loren: no let me pay you have done enough

Eddie: no it's your birthday you get treated.

Loren: ahh fine!

Eddie: good!

Eddie got up and payed for the food and went back to Loren

Loren: wow get enough?

Eddie: i like to make sure i get enough what if we run out?

Loren: wow.

Eddie: yep.

Loren and Eddie sat there eating their food in quite for about 30 minutes.

Loren: i've decided...

Eddie: and...

Loren: ya i guess.

Eddie great now lets get your stuff together and i'll follow you back to your house.

Loren: ok

Loren and Eddie got all of their stuff together and Eddie followed Loren home. When they got the Lorens house Loren pulled into her drive way and Eddie oarked on the curb. Loren got out of her car and walked over to Eddie. Eddie walked up to Loren and grabed her waist and kissed her.

Eddie: Loren Tate will you be my girlfriend?

Loren:... Umm... Yes

Eddie: wonderful!

Eddie kissed Loren againg

Eddie: ok let go inside.

Loren: ok

Loren and Eddie walked up to the house and just as Loren was about to open the Door it swong open...


So how did you guys like it! tell me if i sould continue. peace bye