This is my first ever story on this site hope you like it and please tell me how to improve or anything you want I'll be happy to hear them all.
Chapter 1 - Sorrow times
Alice's P.O.V
It was a chilly morning and the departure of Dan, Baron, Billy and Ace. Marucho didn't want to go because he had to do something at home so Runo, Julie and I stayed behind just incase something went wrong with the portal like last time when Runo got stuck in two dimensions. Ace didn't really seem that good today he hasn't been since Mira left with Keith she didn't tell anyone but sooner or later Ace found out, poor Ace he was a good friend since Shun left me and the others . I'm really angry with shun he hasn't even told me about anything he just completly forgot about me and ran of with Fabia Sheen to Neathea. I think the others found out too I just couldn't hold in my sorrows and I'll never forgive Shun but I still have horrible dreams about him and makes me want to forgive him but on the other hand Ace seems to be nice not that I'm interested or anything. Then in all of the sudden grandfathers portal opened and they slowly left one by one and I stood there with my fake smile on ,waving goodbye and Runo and Julie were crying their eyes out.
"CRASH"
Ace's P.O.V
Poor Alice she must realise now that her smile is fake. She hasn't been talking lately since the Shun incident happend. I just can't believe Mira left us she didn't even say anything about it . I stepped into the portal and realised how angry I am with Mira she should have told us ,so we wont get worried about her but then I don't really like her since she betrayed me I mean us.
"CRASH!"
I looked behind and the others weren't there anymore I couldn't hear Dan squabbling with Baron and Billy all I saw was my guardian bakugan Percival I think we're lost I remeber stepping into the portal with them and the place I am does look like Vestroia we must be seperated but how am I going to get back.
Alice's P.O.V
After the
"CRASH"
a portal appeared and grandfather said that the portal has been seperated so Julie, Runo , Marucho and I had to enter a different portal and grandfather said he wasn't sure who was in which so we all entered a different portal with our bakugans. I waved goodbye to my grandfather and set of with Hydranoid. I realised that I was in Vestroia but I had to see which boy I'm stuck with so I looked around and spotted a bakugan. Hydranoid and I both went to see who it was and to our suprise we found ourselves with Ace and Percival. I ran to Ace and hugged him I was so happy to see him and in return he hugged me back we were so happy until one of Hydranoids head whispered "awwwwwwwwwww"to Percival really quietly but Ace and I heard and immediately let go of our grip and I blushed .
We were just friends I repeated in my head until I heard two familiar voice, " hey guys" Dan and Runo both said in unison
sorry I couldn't do much today I hope you like this first chapter though I'll add another one and make sure it's better and longer this is my first story hope you like it and please say anything I don't mind if its bad I'll have something to improve on.