My first fanfiction on fanfiction
My first fanfiction on !! Be nice and only constructive criticism please. If you do flame me, I'll send an angry Haou and pmsing Jaden after you. Also, don't forget to check out Chibi-Chaos's stories too!
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Haou: pompom25 doesn't own Yu-Gi-Oh GX.
Me: YAY!! THANKIES HAOU!!
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Chapter 1: A New Familiar Named Jaden
Chazz was a high classed Slayer who was looking for a familiar in order to go on higher classed missions. So he went to Sytorious who was head of the familiar department.
"All right, no pressure. Just pick out the familiar that catches your eye Chazz," thought the black haired teen as he walked up to Sytorious's door and knocked.
"Come in," stated Sytorious.
"I'm here for my familiar," said Chazz coming in.
"Okay, then just pick out any familiar that you want," explained Sytorious.
"All right."
A large screen displaying a familiar and its background information was then lowered from the ceiling above Sytorious's desk. Then a minute or two later the screen displayed a different familiar. The cycle continued until Chazz saw a brunette with beautiful chocolate colored eyes.
"That one! I'll take that one," cheered Chazz pointing to the image.
"Oh, um… well, are you sure you want that one?" questioned Sytorious looking through the brunette's papers.
"Positive, why?"
"Well that familiar is high classed and would work well with you, but…"
"But what?"
"That familiar has had only one successful owner, which was Sheppard. All the other Slayers just returned him after a few days."
"Well that was stupid of them, he looks like a good familiar and strength chart shows it too."
"They found him too needy and they thought that he was defective even though he isn't. Are you sure he's the one you want?"
"Of course."
"Then go to this address to pick him up. Although I warn you, you may have to gain his trust after all that he's gone through."
"Thanks, I'll keep that in mind."
Chazz then turned and left the office leaving Sytorious alone again. The fortuneteller then got up and walked towards a wall with many photographs on it. He stopped in front of a picture with Sheppard and the brunette familiar on it and smiled.
"Sheppard maybe Chazz will be able to do what you did with Jaden, but why is it that I sense something foreboding in the future?" predicted Sytorious. "Only time will tell I suppose..."
The next day Chazz arrived at the house to pick up his familiar. It was a small house that was a few miles out of town. He knocked on the door and was greeted by a blond woman with brown eyes.
"Yes?" asked the blond.
"My name's Chazz and I'm here for my familiar," explained Chazz.
"Oh, you're here for Jaden then. My name's Alexis by the way," introduced the blond leading Jaden into the house.
"Nice to meet you," said Chazz.
"Yes, and would you believe me if I told you that you're the 8th Slayer who's taken in Jaden?"
"8th!? You're kidding right?"
"No, I'm not. Jaden was always returned just a few days after he was taken in."
"I see."
"Jaden!! Chazz is here!!"
Chazz and Alexis walked into the living room to see a brunette with chocolate colored eyes wearing a black turtleneck shirt and blue jeans sitting on the couch. The brunette just stared at Chazz, got up off the couch, and walked past him and Alexis. He slowly walked up the stairs to the second floor, went to his room, and slammed the door to his room shut.
"Jaden! Get down here!!" yelled Alexis standing at the bottom of the stairs.
"What was that all about?" thought Chazz until a girl with black hair and brown eyes appeared in front of him.
"You're that Slayer guy right?" asked the girl.
"Y-yeah, what it to ya?" questioned Chazz.
"Well, you aren't going to take Jaden away!!" she screamed kicking Chazz in the shins and running off.
"OW!! SON OF A-" swore Chazz rubbing his shins.
"Blair!! Get back here!! God! Sorry Chazz, Blair's just protective of Jaden since she's his cousin. She does that to every new Slayer since Jaden's third return," apologized Alexis.
"It's all right, can we try and get Jaden to come out of his room now?" asked Chazz.
Both Alexis and Chazz went up to Jaden's room and knocked on his door. Since they only heard a muffled crying sound from behind the door Alexis knocked again.
"Jaden, please open the door," pleaded Alexis knocking again.
"Sniff, go away!!" yelled Jaden as tears poured down his face onto the floor.
"This is ridiculous! Jaden you're behaving badly, just come out and we'll talk this out!" explained Alexis.
"There's nothing to talk about! Sniff! It'll just be the same story like all the other Slayers! Sniff!" retorted Jaden crying even more. "I wanted to go into retirement with Sheppard, but the familiar department said I couldn't! Sniff. After that, I've always been returned for just being who I am!!"
"Oh dear, he's in worse shape than I thought," said Alexis.
"Maybe I should come back later when he's calmed down," suggested Chazz.
"No wait Chazz, we'll work this out," reassured Alexis. "Come on out, please Jaden."
"NO!!" cried Jaden.
"Jaden?"
"J-Jim?" quirked Jaden calming down.
"Now are you gonna keep locking yourself up in your room to avoid your problems or are you going to come out and face your problems?" inquired Jim standing in front of Jaden's door.
"I'll come out."
Slowly the door swung open and Jaden walked out. He threw himself into Jim's arms and began sobbing uncontrollably. Jim and Alexis smiled and lead the brunette down into the living room.
"I-I'm sorry for what happened earlier Chazz, I misjudged you," apologized Jaden wiping away the last of his tears.
"It's okay I didn't really want to force you to come, considering that you were in such bad shape," reassured Chazz rubbing the back of his head sheepishly.
"Maybe you are different than all the other Slayers. You seem kinder and stronger at heart," smiled Jaden.
"Nah, I'm not that strong or kind," blushed Chazz.
"No, truly, Jaden and I both have the ability to a person's inner self, so it's no use hiding it mate," pointed out Jim.
"Well, I guess you're right. But Jaden, do you want to come with me right now or should I come back later?" asked Chazz.
" I'll come right now, but can I say goodbye to everyone first?" questioned Jaden.
"Sure," replied Chazz.
"Jesse's probably outside talking to Blair," stated Alexis.
"Thanks," thanked Jaden walking past Alexis.
Once Jaden went outside he found Blair alone and said his goodbyes to her. Blair also threatened Chazz not to make Jaden cry or else. Later Chazz and Jaden found Jesse in the back of the house in the training area. Jesse had already beaten down a few dummies and left a few craters in the ground.
"Wow, you sure did a number on the training ground again," complemented Jaden walking up to Jesse.
"Who's that?" asked Jesse pointing to Chazz.
"He's my new master," replied Jaden. "I'm here to say goodbye before I go."
"I don't trust him," growled Jesse.
"I don't trust him that well either, but I'm going to give it time," explained Jaden before giving Jesse a kiss on the forehead. "Goodbye Jesse nii-san."
"Goodbye Ju-chan. You better take care of Ju-chan," warned Jesse as Jaden and Chazz left.
"Don't worry, I will," promised Chazz.
Me: Yay! Chapter 1 done!!
Chazz: Yeah, but you made Blair and Jesse think that I was some criminal!!
Me: You're lucky that Haou and Jim weren't thinking the same thing.
Chazz: Gulp. You're right!
Me: Any way more of the fun stuff is gonna happen in the next chapter. (Waves manuscript.)
Jaden: Give it!! You made me like some drama queen!!
Me: That's why Chazz is here. To help you out of your drama queen slump!
Jaden & Chazz: Blush!
Me: Don't forget to leave a comment!